- He was about to end my life. This truly was the end for me. Suddenly a sword pierced through Jack's heart. His expression went blank. The blade retracted and he crumpled to the floor. Standing behind him was Jack's twin brother, Chris. "I'm sorry Jack, But i had to do it," he said with remorse. I saw a tear roll down his cheek. "Andrea, help Max." Andrea ran over to me and preformed emergency first aid on both my of arms. "I see a bright light." She glared at me, "Don't joke like that," she said. "It's the only thing that's keeping me calm. I could be freaking out right now." She smiled, "Okay, that should hold until we get you to a hospital." Chris was about to dial 911 when we heard a gunshot ring.Chris was shot down. Jack was rolled over behind him, and was holding a pistol.
- by vilhauered |
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- | Submitted on 03/25/2012 |
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- Title: please read #2
- Artist: vilhauered
- Description: I'm just continuing my last entry
- Date: 03/25/2012
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- lexcieluv - 03/26/2012
- OMFG................. u r AMAZING!!!!!!!! cant wait 2 read part 2!!!!!!!! smile
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- U-GAME-IS-OVER - 03/25/2012
- you are an excellent writer!! really you should write a book! wink
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