Wishing for something horrible

• Artist: Gaara is crazy11
• Description: Something I wrote during Biology XD please leave comments :)
• Date: 07/28/2011
• Tags: wishing something horrible

I've always been the type of person who spends alot of their time wishing something bad would happen to them. Hit by a car, kidnapped and beaten, anything to show who cares and who doesn't. I just want to know the truth. The truth is sort of a sore subject for me because it's something no one thinks I can handle when in all reality it's what will pull me out of this dark, depressing hole that I've been pushed in to by so many people. Granted, there are people who've helped me by makeing sure that I don't go flying off the edge of insanity. Though, along with those people came the people who just pretended to like me so when they crush me I stay broken.

Comments

[Method1cal]

This is good, and I like the darker feel to it. My only real complaint is how it starts out talking aout wish something bad would happen to someone, then suddenly jumps to wanting to know the "truth".

One other thing, I feel like this is something that should be posted in Poetry and Lyrics rather than fiction isn't it?

Rated 4/5