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This is a story of a young girl named Kimo. Normal people have names like kelly or trisha or something of that sort,but her name was Kimo. Kimo wasnt a goth or an 'emo' she was something,a storyteller,a happy go lucky,a painter,a
anything. Never cared about what people thought about her,or ever said anything about them. Her skin was the color of carmel brown,her eyes are chocolate chips,her hair was light purple frosting,and her cheeks were sometimes rosey pink. She goes to HIKMO high school like all the other girls exept she never wore the stupid uniform that all the other girls wore. Lomki one of the popular girls with all the 8th graders one day saw her crying:
"Kimo! WATS WRONG?!" "Oh its...you ms.Lomki.." "Kimo wats wrong? why are you crying." "I lost something(sniff)." "(oh THATS it)! When did you lose it?"
"I-I are you making fun of me?" "NO!" "Well it doesnt matter" "Uh.." "BYE!"
What a strange girl Lomki thought but she looked for what Kimo lost anyway.
She found it outside of the school "Awww..she has a cute angel purse~ heart ,huh? wats this crazy stuff? hmm...must be some geek props i'll return it to her." "OMIGOSH THANK YOU,THANK YOU AND THANK YOU!""hehe no problem.""Did you look in it?""Yea,""Dont you wanna know whats in it?" "No thanks not into that stuff."Kimo smiled and saw Lomki walk away,she knew she could trust Lomki with Her secret. She picked the right time to tell her,which was lunch time:"HI LOMKI-DEAR!!!""Oh hi..Kimo.""I HAVE BIG NEWS!""uh..." Kimo took her hand and led her to an isolated part of the school:"Good no ones here.""Uh Kimo I've got to go.""WAIT! I've gotta say something! I'VE GOT A BIG SECRET! im a witch."
to be continued >w<
- by ColonelSquidface |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/13/2010 |
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- Title: kimo and junk
- Artist: ColonelSquidface
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Description:
kimo is a very selfless girl who doesnt care what anyone thinks about her.
BUT shes got a big secret.
shes a witch.
Lomki however is the exact oppsite of Kimo,being popular is something very sacred to her,all she wants is a simple love potion but all she gets is a witch!
(lol can sum1 draw wat Kimo and Lomki would look like?) - Date: 11/13/2010
- Tags: magic highschool love comedy
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Comments (1 Comments)
- bubbleblas - 12/11/2010
- It a good storyline but it's ahrd to understand. Use proper spelling and start new paragraphs when a different person starts talking. Also, it will be easier to know who is talking if you use said, sobbed, asked, shouted, ect. 3/5. A good storyline but it's hard to follow.
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