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'Hello? jilly? are you there?' i said. *beep* '
"sorry your connection has been lost please try again later" the phone operater person said.
sad sad sad
i dialed the number again. "Sorry this number is no longer available" the phone operater poerson said.
sad sad sad
i dialed my mom. "Hello this is Laura please leave your name and phone number and i will get back to you as soon as a i can" the voice thing said
"Hey mom it's Carter where are you? i'm at the bus station in the dark, please call me back" i said.
then i hung up.
i looked around.
shivered.
then i heard a voice.
"CARTER?" a mans voice said
"Dad! where have you been!!!!?? where is mom i just called her?" i asked him.
"I heard the voice message so i came." dad said.
i got up.
and reached out to hug him
but he was gone.
"Dad? where did you go? This isn't funny i'm scared!" i said.
nothing.
then the bus pulled up to the station.
i got on.
gave the bus driver my ticket thing and sat down.
apparently i was the only one on the bus that night.
so she asked me "Where are you going to?"
"Turrill Road Please." i said.
after about 15 minutes i was home.
well not home exactly i had to walk about 3 houses down
when i got home i tried opening the door.
nothing.
could this day get any worse?? i thought to myself.
then i heard some thunder and it started raining.
well i guess this day can get worse i thought to myself
i knocked on the door.
waited about 5-7 minutes
NOTHING.
i stared crying.
no lights were on inside my house.
so i went next door.
i knocked on the door
waited 5 minutes
the door opened.
i was so happy
then i realized......
to be continued
- by ii AznCookieMonstahh ii |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/19/2010 |
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- Title: Alone and Afraid in darkness
- Artist: ii AznCookieMonstahh ii
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Description:
my story that just came outta the top of meh head please no rude comments
FIRST CHAPTER! - Date: 02/19/2010
- Tags: alone darkness
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Comments (2 Comments)
- NothingKeeps - 03/11/2010
- yoooh.............. that was awesome! looking forward to the to be continued part!! =DD
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- mommy1233 - 03/06/2010
- oh my gosh....THAT WAS SO SUSPENSE!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!5/5!!!!MWAH!!!
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