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chapter 3 learning
"Okay is it true that vampires burn in the sunlight?" i asked. " yes it is true
but there are ways to stop it." he replied with a look of interest on his
beautiful face."how?" i asked feeling left in the dark. he smiled and replied "i
shall in lighten you on what it is and how we found it." " what we use to
protect is from the sunlight is a french plant called Fenouil or in English
Fennel." "yes i have heard of it" i replied. " the plants name means strength,
it strengthens our skin to fight against the sun.." " Our ancestors found this
plant back in the seventeen hundreds, it was thought to enhance there
amazing en-human strength." "but one vampire thought differently so he
experimented one day by walking in daylight and found that his theory was
correct, the plant didn't enhance strength it enhanced there skin." "that is
outrageously cool" i bellowed out like a bumbling idiot. he chuckled "yes
ended" he said with that silky voice i love. "how did it protect him, i mean
how does it protect us?" i asked in curiosity. he smiled and pulled something
out from underneath his shirt. it was a silver necklace with a purplish color
in the center surrounded by entwined pieces of silver. "its beautiful" i said
mesmerized by the necklace. " not as beautiful as you my beloved." he said
his eyes filling with compassion for me. " so you put the Fenouil in a
necklace." "yes that is right" he answered still his eyes havering that
compassion in them. " is it true that we can be killed by wooden stakes." i
watched his face when i said this his face glowed when i said we. He
laughed out loud"no my dear nothing can harm us but our own thoughts
and feelings, not holy water of fire or anything else in the myths you have
heard." i smiled and nodded thinking how lucky i was to be invincible. "are
there anymore questions you have about your new way of life" he asked his
face still glowing. "only one, do we have to drink the blood or only humans
to survive." " sadly my love yes that is the only way for us to survive but
there are other ways to did it without killing the humans, only the most
gruesome and black-hearted vampires kill there victims." Ambrosie will you
teach me how to not harm the humans." "of course i would, i wouldn't even
dream of letting you become a black-hearted vampire" "i smiled and layed
my head on his shoulder and whispered in his ear" i love you Ambrosie"
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i looked up at him into his beautiful eyes and i saw more then heard him say
"i love you to." i smile i believe this was the happiest i had ever been in my
life. H explained to me the rules of the vampire world and how that if i broke
these rules that there could be severe consequences. one of the rules was
that you could not change a human unless you had specific permission by
the "counsel" god lord i thought to myself to think i thought i hated
rules before. then i heard him chuckle again. rats i forgot he could hear
me. then i got to thinking again not really but in a way. then i said what
about my family i suddenly blurted out. he sighed and wrapped his arms
around me."that my dear is another thing about our life style they cannot
know about us there for you must leave them behind." i felt my heart
shatter to bits and pieces how could i live i without my parents, brother,and
my twin sister. i guess he heard me because he said you could leave them
a note that simply states that you are going away and wont be coming back
for a long time." my heart filed with hope maybe one day i could come
back. "yes actually you could come back but only after you have control,
right now if you saw one of your family members you could kill them
because its just our nature." " oh i see no i dont want that i understand." he
grabbed me in his arms and spoke so softly and in that beautiful french
accent of his i could have sworn i was hearing a angel."oh mon'cherrie im
so sorry." im so glad i took french in school i knew exactly what he had said
oh gosh it sounded beautiful. i saw him smile "you know french." he almost
asked. "yes a little" "did you understand what i said?" " yes as a matter of
fact i did."i answered
"you said my dear,sweetheart." "very good im impressed." he announced
grinning. "you will find out my darling that i learn quickly." " oh really." he
said his eye brows raised. i smiled as my lips touched his,so soft as if i was
kissing a cloud.
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- | Submitted on 12/22/2009 |
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- Title: cold kissess
- Artist: XxKitty_of_DeathxX
- Description: this is the next chapter of my story
- Date: 12/22/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxKitty_of_DeathxX - 01/14/2010
- okay thanks for the tip i wasnt really sure what to do about the quotes my LA teacher didnt say anything about it so i just assumed
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- The Lacey Bear - 01/03/2010
- several issues-- I couldn't get past the first few lines because these things were driving me nuts and distracting me. in lighten=> enlighten. Dialogue from a new person belongs in a new paragraph. i=> needs to be capitalized. Also, you put the quotes around the dialogue, not EACH sentence. If a person is distracted by all these things, they'll miss out on the story, so fix that stuff and maybe more people can enjoy your writing.
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