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“Yumi...I have something to tell you." Said Rei.
Yumi didn't hear him.
"Yumi?"
Yumi looked at him. "Huh?"
"I said I have something to tell you."
She smiled. "What is it?"
He sighed. "I've been lying to you. I don't love you."
Yumi pretended not to hear him. "Hmm? What was that?"
"You heard me. I've been lying to you all along. I don't love you." He repeated.
Yumi stared at him for a long time. "Rei...why...-"
"I wanted to tell you this now, because I can't stand you."
"You're kidding right?"
"No. I hate you."
Yumi slapped him across the face. "WHY! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?!"
"I told you. I can't stand you anymore." He said.
"I know. But why did you be with me for 2 years? That's 2 years of betrayal!"
"I-"
She began running away, not wanting to hear anymore of this stupidness.
Rei glared. Trying to run away? You'll pay for that slap! He thought, running twice as fast as her. When he caught up, he cupped her mouth and dragged her somewhere...
When Yumi woke up, she looked around. She realized she was in a dark room, somewhere in a biulding. There was only one light in there. A very dim one. She was tied to a chair. Oh my god...where am I? She thought.
She was getting scared.
Rei was behind her without a sound. "Yumi." He said.
Yumi jumped. And turned. "What do you want?" She asked, nervously.
He laughed, smirking. "I want you dead tonight."
"Huh? What the..."
"Oh, I won't go to jail. I blame it on others. I'm skilled. Believe it or not."
Yumi glared. "I don't believe you."
"Fine." He left.
Yumi stared. "...Eh..."
"I'll be back."
When he came back, Yumi turned around again and saw a crate.
"What's up with tha-"
"You'll be in it."
"What?!"
"I said, you'll be in there. Dead. But I want to hurt you first." He said, untying her. When she was untied, she tried to run. But Rei was too fast. He used his scythe and whacked her with it, 10 times on the head. She screamed as blood gushed out.
He laughed evily.
"What did I ever do to you? Why are you doing this?"
"You slapped me. And I don't let anyone do that."
Yumi tried runnign again, but Rei hit her till she had no strength. She was bleeding all over. Then Rei carried her, and put her in the crate. Then began hammering it shut. Sooner or later, she died.
- by obsidian stars |
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- | Submitted on 11/22/2009 |
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- Title: A love that's a nightmare
- Artist: obsidian stars
- Description: This is about 2 couples as everyone thinks。But no one knows the truth about them。Even the girl;because her boyfriend has been lying to her ever since。。。it's going to be a long story so I’ll start off with them being together one day。 Alone。。。
- Date: 11/22/2009
- Tags: love thats
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Comments (4 Comments)
- obsidian stars - 11/26/2009
- Please don't comment about bad things. Just TELL me what's bad, and I'mm fix it. And no, I won't make a chapter 2.
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- THE POOPY PIE - 11/24/2009
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5/5 Awesome! Who wouldn't think this story deserves a 5? V_v
I think you should make a chapter 2! - Report As Spam
- 231crazy faith - 11/24/2009
- i dont really like this story...........could use some really needed improvement
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- obsidian stars - 11/23/2009
- Can someone rate mine?
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