- Jamie and John were just seventeen, but deeply in love. They were told one night by a friend that there was some type of demonic spirit, or ghost somewhere in their neighborhood. Of course they didn't believe it. But, just in case, one night, John placed a video camera on his bedroom dresser before they went to bed, he was going to videotape the night to see if there was some paranormal activity, and see it he was lying or not. "Don't worry, there is no such thing, Jamie." John said, hugging her. "I know that, it's just...I don't know." She said, scared and nervous about the night. "Just, let's go to bed, ok?". John said, excited for the morning to rub it in his friend's face that he was wrong and such a frod. It was almost 2:30 in the morning, the door was wide open and then slammed shut, very very loudly. They both woke up. "Must have been the wind," John said, trying to be brave, "Go back to sleep." 3:30 in the morning, it opened, creaking very loudly. "It's coming, John, it's coming!" Jamie said, crying. John wouldn't wake up, no matter how many times Jamie nudged him. The door slamed shut, then open, then shut, then all the way open. A powerful breeze blew Jamie's hair all around. She layed down, her chin under the covers, she was so scared she couldn't move. "Ow! Crap, what was that?!!?" Jamie screamed, she rolled up her long sleeved shirt, and saw in shock that she had a gash, and a huge bite in her arm. "Oh my god, oh my god. JOHN! Wake the hell up!" Jamie screamed, tears rolling down her cheeks. "Please, please! JOHN!" She kept screaming, collecting more gashes, and bite marks in her arms, legs, stomache, and even face! He wouldn't wake up, Jamie thought that John was dead. Her true love. Soulmate. I wanted to know what the hell this thing was...it was obvisously and spirit, or some demon that came out from hell. Jamie wasn't moving, just shaking, staring, and crying her eyes out. Her eyes were beat red. Jamie screamed....collecting more bites and gashes deep into her arms and legs, screaming filled the room. John didn't wake up.
- Title: Paranormal Activity Chapter 1.
- Artist: God Dizzy
- Description: Jamie, and John are videoing typing their home at night in their bedroom, because they hear that there is some sort of "spirit" or "ghost" in their neighborhood. They don't belive it, so they want to see if it is true....it is. This is chapter 1, so stay tuned for my next chapter. :D
- Date: 10/27/2009
- Tags: paranormal activity
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Athnamas621 - 12/26/2009
- Thank you all!
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- Little Milkflower - 12/17/2009
- never seen it as a movie, but nice job! *thumbs up*
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- MTM9696 - 12/17/2009
- Lawl. Of course it's a movie biggrin . nice job at the writing
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- God Dizzy - 10/27/2009
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It is? WHAAAT?!!!?
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- iikrissy_cupcakerz - 10/27/2009
- isnt that like a movie or something?
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