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I was left there to see
Being a witness to a crime
I was left there to feel
Bleeding when there is no torn
I was mute
When I still have the voice
He was there by his will
To witness a cold beauty
He was there to feel
The warm in her stone heart
He was there to speak
Not by voices but by eyes
He was there to cure
To bring back soul to a soulless body
She tried to run away but she can’t
She tried to escape but she felt lost
She tried to ignore but she torn
She tried to pretend and it's hurt
Why him?
A human for the vampire?
Why him?
A mortal for the royal princess?
Her clan won’t ever understand it.
She won’t understand it either.
But it’s hurt. Deep inside she can feel the pain.
Deep inside she knows it’s bleeding.
And there’s no cure except his love, his touch and his voice.
Today the new vampire is so excited.
He will meet the most beautiful princess that he love.
He walk inside her palace but it’s silence there.
He can’t understand all the sad faces
They said she miss her human love so much
They said she can’t live without him
She ended her own life, stabbing pointed wood into her heart.
He stands in front of her glass coffin.
She still as beauty as she was
He was still as good as he was
Never will he leave her.
He’s time is near.
He can felt it
Soon will he leave this world
To meet his true love
Be one in the light.
- by violet kushina |
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- | Submitted on 09/25/2009 |
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- Title: love don't choose
- Artist: violet kushina
- Description: this is the first time i wrote this kind o stuff.. n i still thinks lots to improve it... pliz leave improving comment n a few suggestion..i totally appreciate them all..
- Date: 09/25/2009
- Tags: immortal love vampire
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Comments (3 Comments)
- danni507 - 05/28/2010
- IT WAS REALLY GOOD biggrin ...why not come read mine ! THREE QUEENS and THE STORY OF MY LIFE
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- Hanatoru - 04/29/2010
- also, i have new poetry biggrin please come check it out
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- Hanatoru - 04/29/2010
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it was good, but coulda been a lot better if you would of:
~you could of worded it a bit better, some of your tenses were off and hinting instead of pointing out point blank can draw people in
~you had a leter scheme going on, and a rhyme scheme for the last words would of complamented that - Report As Spam