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Hazy beams of light were cast across a young girl wrapped in a tight ball, as the beams began to travel up to her face she began to stir. Once conscious of her surroundings she pushed herself up into a seated position, her eyes still puffy from the night before. She took one hand and rubbed it against her eye while the other was placed firmly in her lap, she began to yawn when she heard a sudden snap from somewhere in the distance. She whipped her head around to the origin of the sharp sound, her ears twitching like a cat. She appraised her surroundings, a decrepit warehouse walls rusting and partially boarded up windows, there were piles of steel and abandoned power tools strewn about at random. The snapping sound seemed to originate from the loft above the girl, and this put her on edge. The hair on the back of the girls neck rose sharply, and a guttural roar was building up in her throat, a second presence had joined the first, but this time it was on the other side of her, they were surrounding her and she knew it.
The strange figures began to close in on her location, and she began to feel her skin prickle, she lept to her feet, and was in a defensive stance, her unkempt main of hair billowing around her wildly. The first figure came out of the shadows and coolly walked toward the wild girl, instinctively she poised herself for quick action, her fingers like knives. The man stopped his advance, and instead called out in a cool, crisp voice, “It’s okay, we don’t want to hurt you” his face expressionless. He had blue eyes, crystal clear blue eyes that revealed nothing he did not want to be seen. The wild girl was taken aback by his words and it took her a moment to process the language, it had been a while since she had the need to communicate in such a manner, but quickly it came back to her, still she did not answer but relaxed her stance slightly, the pulsing in her core slowing. “Really, it’s okay,” The blue eyed man cooed as she cracked a smile.
Then things began to happen very fast. The second figure that had nearly been pushed out of her mind suddenly made a swift movement, and a whooshing sound pierced the air, a small dart lodged itself in her flesh at the base of her neck. She slowly began loosing focus, her body shaking violently, rippling changes in and out of her body, hair followed one ripple, just to be sucked back the next, claws elongated and sharpened, and bones began to crack and morph back and forth somewhere between human and feline. As the drug began to take control of her system, the pulsing slowed and she began to revert into a smaller body, her mind still there, but she found herself unable to control her limbs any longer, the Snow haired man with the sapphire eyes walked over to her body and looked into her eyes “It truly doesn’t hurt… once you get used to it… all you have to do is obey my kitten.” A sneer marred his handsome features as he kicked the girl to the other side where she saw a voluptuous dark skinned woman walk towards the dimming light in her eyes.
- Title: To Awaken to Death
- Artist: Sinomina
- Description: Just a really short story i wrote, i would like some feedback, tell me what you think.
- Date: 09/18/2009
- Tags: awaken animal transform action
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Parsleys Thyme - 10/16/2009
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Wow. That was awesome. Great job. I loved it how she morphed into a cat and how you used a variety of words to describe throughout the story. It was great. 5/5 and a fave for you.
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