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We meet eyes and I’m forced not to look away. I know he has feelings for me, he always had, but not at this level of intensity. He slowly walks over to and I want to run. How could I though. I don’t have the heart to break his. He stands right in front of me. God, why am I a hopeless romantic? He’s so close I look straight into his deep honey eyes speckled with gold. No wonder all the girls fall for him. Why don’t I? Is it because I know who he is on the inside and I don’t just see his utter most beauty on the outside. Maybe I’m just blind and don’t see what they see.“ So, umm, what’s up?”
He laughs “ is that the best you can do?” He sounds amused
“Well, you seem so serious and that scares me. In the middle of the night especially .”
He does one of toughs’ grins that all the girls melt at first sight. Me? I don’t worship a smile.
“You know you’re safe with me” He’s using the knight in shining armor talk. To be honest, I kinda like it. Then he cradles his arms around my head while he looks around pretending to scout for danger. I can’t help but laugh.
“You’re a dork”
“Well at least I don’t ruin a mood”
“What mood?” Maybe I can escape this. I love him but I cant return it yet. Hopefully well things get better. I’m not prepared when he wraps his arm around my waist, pulls me into him, and places a kiss on my lips. I never felt anything like this. It wasn’t harsh and over dramatic, it was soft and loving. This wasn’t a kiss saying I love you. It was a kiss that told me he was prepared to do anything for me and the same love he has for me.
- by KorriiChan |
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- | Submitted on 09/13/2009 |
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- Title: Kiss Scene
- Artist: KorriiChan
- Description: I'm trying to write a story that has some action and some romance so, heres a kiss scene and I REALLY would like opinions. A tip, anything bold and italicized is the girls thoughts. ^^
- Date: 09/13/2009
- Tags: kiss
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sango Shadow 23 - 11/11/2010
- I love it! You're really good! smile I'm definitely looking forward to a story you write
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- SayuKira - 11/13/2009
- Doll-san!!! This is great. Very good. Funny and romantic!!!
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