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-Zane- 2012.....declared as the day a comet will hit earth.....Armageddon........i am Zane......and i am telling you this story
-Zane Wakes up in the Morning- -Yawn-
-Says-....hmp......last day i will every have -,-...
-Turns on TV-
TV:This just in...the comet will hit earth today...at night 9:25......lets hope god saves us!
-Turns off TV-
-Zane-........-Starts praying-
30Minutes later
-Zane-...whats that noise ?
-Zane Goes out to the balcony-
-Zane-.......its 9:00....only 25 minutes on my clock ........-comet aproaches-........
-Zane- Wondered-...were is god?....why.....why he wants this?
-Zane- Draws a summoning circle on the floor
-Zane Starts praying-
-???- hehehe.........well....if it isnt Zane...... twisted
-Zane-............whats the spirit's name....wich i speak?
-Devil-......they call me 666.....
-Zane looks Shocked-....you......WHY DO YOU WANT FROM ME!?
-Devil-...i am here to Save you...........on 1 condition .........
-Zane Thinking-...what the heck?.....he wants to save me? o.o
-Zane-.....whats this condition you talk about .....demon
-Devil-Offer me your soul...and i will teleport you to hell....and save you....together....we can create a new world
-Zane-this is it........i have to chose ....life...or death
-Devil- come on Zane............the Future Shadow Lord of Shadows twisted only 5 minutes for teh comet to hit earth
-Zane-....damn you devil...........but there is no Choice
-Zane-..i offer my Soul to you.......... evil scum
-Devil-.....good...............-Yells-CHOICE!
-Evil Dark Force Hits Zane-
-Zane-AHHRGH....WHAT IS THIS?
-Devil-....dont yell.....JUST ENJOY YOUR NEW LIFE!
-Zane Disapears-
-Zane Appears in Fiery place-
-Zane Gasps 3 times-
-Zane-.....were the hell am i?........
-Dark Figure aproaches Zane-
-Dark Figure-....enjoy your new life............Zane......The Shadow Lord
-Zane The Shadow Lord Looks at his new Wearings-
-Zane The Shadow Lord-.......hey i look ........DIABOLICAL! >: P
-Dark Figure Gives 2 Scythes to Zane The Shadow Lord-
-Zane The Shadow Lord-........and what happened to earth?
-Dark Figure-....you will find out adventualy twisted
-Zane The Shadow Lord-.....hmp........well........it was nice dealing with the devil.........so right now...........what should i do?
-Dark Figure-...i dont know xP...figure it out your self
-Zane The Shadow Lord-.....oook.........o.o...btw were is the Devil?
-Dark Figure-.....you are talking to him XD
-Zane-....o....then i must say...Thanks........for saving my life
-Dark Figure-...dont mention it...Commander Zane.........dont mention it ...be sure to enjoy your new life...... twisted ...
-Zane The Shadow Lord-...i will........i will twisted
-Zane The Shadow Lord-...so...this was my story.....this is why .....i am here...in hell talking to you....my fellow demons.....this....is...why...............we will live on twisted
THE END!
- by Zane The Shadow Lord |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/12/2009 |
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- Title: Armageddon 2012
- Artist: Zane The Shadow Lord
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Description:
This is my first story so i hope for you to enjoy ^^.....(i hope you really like it o.o...plz rate)
^^ - Date: 08/12/2009
- Tags: armageddon
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Ty Gwynnia - 05/08/2010
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It, uh, needs work.
You need more details, and putting the character's names like that is confusing. Punctuation is key too. - Report As Spam
- Zane The Shadow Lord - 08/12/2009
- ...i know x3
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- Epic Kittehsaurus - 08/12/2009
- You spelled Armageddon wrong XD
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