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Once upon a time,there lived a princess in a little cottage downtown.Her name was Princess Natalie.One day,when she was outside picking flowers in her garden,an evil witch cast a curse on the princess.The beautiful princess turned into an ugly ogre.Every was so scared that they never returned outside ever again.The princess was very sad and lonely.She ran to the river and saw her reflection.She screamed and then a little girl herd her.The little girl asked why were you crying and Princess Natalie said that an evil witch cast a curse on her and turned her into an ugly ogre.So the little asked to help the princess and the princess said yes.So the little went to her house brought back some berries and told the princess to eat them.So the princess did as she was told and all of a sudden thr princess turned into a beautiful young princess as she was before.
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- by TophBeiFong101 |
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- | Submitted on 07/29/2009 |
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- Title: the curse of the princess
- Artist: TophBeiFong101
- Description: a princess was cursed by an evil witch
- Date: 07/29/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- A Cow goes Meow - 07/31/2009
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I really dont understand this, (and you have a few gramatical errors by the way.)
The berries that the little girl gave the princess, were the magical? And stories like this normally have a morale to the story...
Anyways... 3/5 - Report As Spam
- aya Fujimiya_Omi Takatori - 07/29/2009
- its pretty good 4/5. and omg love your username, avatar is one of my fav shows, and that character is one of the coolest!!
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- prettykittykat425 - 07/29/2009
- umm ok its ok umm idk 3/5
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