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preface
Life sucked already my parents disowned me for no reason but now that im uncovering the truth i think they were afraid so they ran away. You see my destiny is to fight off the darkness that is trying to take over the world. If u thought your life sucked think agian. I must fight the darkness alone or so i thought from the sound of it i have a sidekick whom was caught by the darkness on his way to find me. Another thing on my to do list: 1. save zeke (my sidekick) 2. fight the darkness for as long as possible and 3. find my parents (if there still alive) . By the way my name is Idalia and im 16 yea 16 and i have to fight the darkness im not ready for this im not but my teacher once said to never give up no matter how harsh the road is. So i guess im stuck with this fight but im not trained yea.... im going to die a week in to my journey i didnt sign up for this at all.
where to start
I woke up one morning to find that my parents and alot of their things were missing at first i was going to call the cops but i found a note:
Dear Idalia,
im sorry dear we left on such short notice but we cant hand that you must fight the darkness we leave a few things behind like food and cloths. we love you and never forget that im sorry deeply that we have to leave u like this but its for your safty and ours. We really do love u. Also you wont be alone someone is going to train u and show you the right way but unforutnate zeke was caught by the darkness please be careful and we'll see each other some day
love ,
mom and dad
After i read that i broke down. How could they do this to me........
to be continued
- by X_x IDALIA x_X |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/16/2009 |
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- Title: darkness
- Artist: X_x IDALIA x_X
- Description: its about a chick whos life is screwed up and she must face the darkness thats trying to take over the world. its a background story for my avi
- Date: 07/16/2009
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Zeke The Vampire King - 07/21/2009
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i love it hun! i'm sucha sexy sidekick
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- Shirubashita - 07/19/2009
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unless ur narraion takes place in an alternate universe.
Appart from the constructive criticism; i have to say that it is a great piece and that it has great pontential it could be used for an underground style fantasy narration developed in the real nowadays world. - Report As Spam
- Shirubashita - 07/19/2009
- if i were u i wouldn't put the "by the way my name is Idalia... yea 16" part in the story i would just let it be dropped on the letter addressed to her and i would also change the name couse its not a very realistic one but u can always say that her life sucks partly because of having such a ridiculous name. (not ment to say that the name is ridiculous its quite intrereting but its not very common and people would probably laugh at you if you had that name).
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