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“No!” she cried out. Breaths heavily as she runs towards his dead body. Down on her knees, as tears drop down her cheek, “No please don’t go. I need you here, don’t leave me…HELP!” she yells. Placing his head on her arms keeping him close to her as possible. As the sirens from the police and the ambulance roaring through the loud crowd. “How can I let him leave? Why is this happening to me? Why…?”
Her life struggles as more and more problems seems to pile up. She does not know what to do; she has no one in her life…until someone comes along. A reflection appears in the mirror, a glance of her past and her future; determine if she should forget the past. On the other hand, whether to move on and start a new fresh life. With drugs and alcohol, surrounding her presence seems to bring her two steps back and not three steps forward. Not only that, in her reflection she sees her love ones disappear one by one. Leaving her life and never coming back without a goodbye. Do you think she can survive this journey? Well it is up to her to take that right path instead of the left one…
- Title: Avoiding Mirrors
- Artist: Dj Silly
- Description: An introduction to a story I'm currently writting. It's very long but it does catches your attention though..Please vote (:
- Date: 07/12/2009
- Tags: avoiding mirrors
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Comments (3 Comments)
- impiousLion - 11/24/2009
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Very good. Could use some very minor adjustments, but I'd love to read the rest. ^ ^ 4/5.
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- [Dealer_Of_Fate] - 07/15/2009
- Girl, I didn't know you had creativity. ;D
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- Beloved Note - 07/14/2009
- Great piece :]
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