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The vision of hope ep 1
Chapter 1-The Storm
Do you believe in demons?If you don't that's fine..but just to tell you, you should really change your mind.As for me i guess you can say i believe, or used to.My names Ashley and im 12.Yup simple number.I don't know where i came from, only that it was raining when i got here.This is what i remember.
It was raining like crazy and i heard voices, most of them saying the same thing over and over like 'O dear please for the love of God don't let go!!!" or "Please make this storm stop for a second". I also remember holding on to someone, holding on for dear life as they were saying to do, but sadly thunder struck me and i let go.Last thing i remember is falling down into purple lights.
My point is i have no idea about my pass, somehow i got amnesia. Or at least im pretty sure of that,anyway my life now is good and im happy for that.To tell you the truth though i hope one day i find out what my past was, but again you know what they say 'becareful what you wish for' and for once i agree.
My day starts as any day would i wake up, get up and take a shower and go to school, simple as that.I live in New York, Brooklyn to be more specific.I go down to the kitchen and see my 'dad' reading the newspaper. "Morning honey" is all he says without even looking up."Morning dad" is all i reply back.Im not as close to my dad as i am to my mom.You know how it is if you have your mom its easier to talk to her and get closer connection then with your dad.Thats another thing i have to find out why.One more thing is I like to think about alot of things at once ive been like that for as long as i can remember but again there was alot i didnt rememebr,o and ive been in this world with my new memory for about six year yup since six or at least thats what i thought my age was.Anyhow i go past my dad and go straight out the door to walk to school.That was the last time i saw my 'parents',or was it.
- by Ash The Tiger |
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- | Submitted on 07/07/2009 |
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- Title: The Vision Of Hope Chapter One
- Artist: Ash The Tiger
- Description: Vision Of Hope Chapter One, About A Girl Who Well...You'll See
- Date: 07/07/2009
- Tags: vision hope chapter
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- candy-pop1999 - 07/14/2009
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it's pretty good, but it would be some advice to slow down and cut down your sentences.
i give it a 4/5, but a 5/5 for your ideas.
nice title!
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