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thrown over(draft of chapter 2
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Chapter 2 time to kick it!!
*Splash* *cough* *cough* I was way off when I said Florida’s coastline turns out I’m in the Erie Canal or something cause it's so cold. It only looks like 20 ft of width water so like in 10 minutes after fighting the current I’ll get out of there and hopefully I don’t get hypothermia and get to the city soon before night fall and get back to California.
Oh! I forgot to mention my name is Bryan; Bryan Dayton, 6 ft tall, black hair sucecful in life n some other i should kep to myself. “TAXI!!!” “Where to?” “How much to los angles Cali?” “Wow I recon 800.00$” I check my wet wallet I pulled out 1,000 and still had some about 500.00 dollars “Actually I think I might stroll New York tonight how much?” “I recon 80.00 dollars” “Hope you like wet 10’s.” “You are kidding? We take burnt, dirty, and stinky; heck we even take virtual money.” I laughed and I gave it to him the money not knowing what to expect there.
An hour later it was almost 6:00 the sun was just about to set in that very mild day. A lot has happen today, I get thrown it the big void of space, I land in what I think was the Erie Canal…….. “Uh excuse me what body of water did I fall on?” “I’d say ya fell in the …… uh the…….Hudson river by Catskill mountain I think.” So I fell in the Hudson River, so once again I was way off by 590,000,000 miles at first and now I’m 90 miles off. Well it doesn’t matter because now I’ll kick it in New York until I can find a place to sleep and maybe some dry close and head to Cali tomorrow.
Well, next day I find myself buying worthless stuff like a electric guitar, a Mac laptop, a USB (16 GB) and all those stuff, PSP, memory stick and more leaving me with 900.00 dollars. Ok it’s time to go back to Cali. So I’m walking down Knickerbocker and suddenly I was caught by the neck with some machete and was pulled into a dark alley and I heard a deep voice saying, “I saw the money hand it over NOW!! WELL WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!” “For your little buddy to take this stupid yet deadly weapon off my neck!!” suddenly he removed the oversized knife “Hey I know you!” I did know that voice and I have never been in this part in Brooklyn so I say, “I we know each other then come out there’s no need to fear unless you come with a strike, then I’ll spare no mercy.” Then a non-forgettable face appeared “Chad…” “Or should I say the see saw, u see a man one day, next u dont ” “You still remember my old nickname how toughing.” Chad. He was one of my classmates in the 9th and after 12th grade I never heard about him again.
I knew I got myself in a whole of trouble; nothing I couldn’t handle.
I always despised him he always tried to immediate me but he ended up regretting it when I got him suspended for 140 days almost half the school year! He then started to take out an unarmed grenade that can wipe out half a block! As I tried to take the grenade for his crazy hands he activated his grenade and almost threw it until I caught it with a pillow I brought form bed, bath, and beyond and took my bags. I faked run so when he gains speed I’ll strike with my strength + his speed to give him a deadly blow. I turn and *wham* *drip* *drip*
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Title:
thrown over(draft of chapter 2
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Artist:
redhollowlives999
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Description:
this is a story all about my teach's class ent upside down n she said sit right there n she gave me 101 pg to write a book i hope u lie the draft n cut me some slackcause im only 13 so the grammer n stuff isnt that great on the final piece but i sorta forgot to hand so here i am with a book n i kno th plot n names arent tht clear but just work with me here ok?
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Date:
06/29/2009
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