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Running. I just kept running. Darkness all around me. I couldnt see any thing, but I kept running... One hall way with millions of carved doors. I couldnt see them, but I knew they were there. Somthing was dripping down my face, over my eyes and into my mouth... blood. The dim merky smell covered the salty-rust smell of the blood. Somthing tripped me, somthing scally and wet.... it coiled around my body, i bleed more. It laughs at me, it says its name is 'Naga' ... It says we are of the same beginning, not of snake's blood, but of a god's blood. He leans down close to me, wraping his tail tighter aroud me, I can feel his cold breath on my neck. Hes smiling at me, his sharp white teeth seem to glow a briliant white agenst the darkness. He runs his cool, scally lips over my neck, he wraps his arms around me... my breath turns shallow and then he bites me. I cant breath for a few seconds, then i gasp for air once. It feels good, my back arks. He laughs deep in his hallow chest. He calls me his love. I dont argue, I just want more. He puts his and on the back of my head and grips at my hair, he bites me again. It feels so good, better than any thing iv ever felt... and I can get enough. He lets my arms free, I want him closer. My heart... its beeting so fast... I wonder if it will explode in my chest. My neck starts to bleed, he licks it away for me and says I can feel this way all the time if i stay with him. But I cant... My memories come crashing back onto me... I remember... I love another...
- by Prince ROME-ance |
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- | Submitted on 06/12/2009 |
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- Title: only made this in two min.
- Artist: Prince ROME-ance
- Description: can you rate this for me? on a 1 to 10 scale? a friend made this and she asked me what i thought. i liked it and i wanted to get other people's oppenions on it too. she tought of and wrote it in two min.
- Date: 06/12/2009
- Tags: only made naga goddess
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Comments (5 Comments)
- demon kirka - 10/02/2010
- more please i want to know what happens
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- Prince ROME-ance - 06/13/2009
- thanks, i'll have to tell her that you guys like it ^.^ and i think a Naga is a half human half snake god... i dont know my self though.
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- popsinger102 - 06/13/2009
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i thaught it was awsome wat is the scaly thing tho???? - Report As Spam
- IVIapleleaf - 06/12/2009
- OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! this is so good! it caught me fromt the begining!! write more!!
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- Paramore2789 - 06/12/2009
- Great begining! I am intruiged! Write on! On a scale of one to ten I give it a seven! Keep writing and read my work.
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