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Darkness utter and complete darkness its a form of bliss isnt it? I mean think about it when it is dark you have privacy,you have a sense of calmness, you have uneasyness, and especially.... FEAR. In my darkness there is nothing but fear and I guesse adrenaline. Because in my darkness i am hunting for the infamous vampires. You may say vampires are fake or that you have heard this type of story far to many times but frankly i dont give a rats a**. They are real they are vicous they cause harm and death, but we are winning. We are hunting them we are fighting the once thought invincable ceatures and even with our short lives our weak bodies and our slow adaptions we are winning. Now you may ask how? how can we beat them? we can because they have me. My name is Tristan olley and i am a vampire hunter/half vampire. I have there speed there strenght there wisdom and i am much more dangerous and I am writing this to show and record my activities.
I am running. running faster than any human faster then any imaginable creature and i am on the hunt. There is a group of vampires ahead of me running as fast as possible afraid of me. One slows and that was his mistake I pounce from behind pulling out my knife i make quick work of the strageler. Then i turn on the next closest vampire a short distance ahead.
Within throwing distance. chunk and interesting sound unless you hear it landing smoothely between your shoulder blades. his body falls to the ground he dosent even have time to scream. as I pass him i scoop up and yank out my knife with a quick ''thank you'' I am off to the third and final vampire.
Now the first two vampires were easy kill but the last one is armed with a fully loaded machine gun. sensing his creeping death and with nothing to lose he turns and starts emptying rounds. I expected this what i didnt exspect was when i jumped to a near tree he would aim up not down and I managed to take a full hit straight in the chest shattering three of my ribs. then he ran out of bullets and ran screaming like a girl. Then i got pissed and took of after him at a slower pase due to three jacked up ribs. Yet i still caught up and made a slow job off beheading him. Now my last problem is How in the name of god am i going to get to my house in time to patch up these ribs with out bleeding to death on the way?
- by x- Morgasim -x |
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- | Submitted on 05/26/2009 |
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- Title: Night Hunters
- Artist: x- Morgasim -x
- Description: A simple vampire hunt turns into a serious battle for my life.
- Date: 05/26/2009
- Tags: night hunters
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Comments (3 Comments)
- this username is invalid - 07/14/2009
- interesting plot, but a ton on typos and stuff. if u keep going, be sure to clean that up and add more details so the entire story doesnt take like a minute to finish. overall, pretty good.
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- Whoa_Dang - 05/27/2009
- A lot of run-ons in there. Be careful with tense change too. Most of it is in present, but somewhere in the third paragraph you switch to past tense.
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- AkaneC - 05/26/2009
- Thats a cute ending.
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