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The truth about love
Intro
The question that many ask and the answer that is not quit easy to understand. In an emotional twist between spouses, you find the use of this term “love“. This is when you so call feel it in your heart ….the question you ask now is do you love me? Can you interpret that you are truly in love and that your feelings comes from deep within your heart. Can you find a reason for the pain you get when you are cheated on or rejected. Most lovers are not aware of their ambition towards love. The only thing they know is that they want to have someone to please them. Just like 18 year old Leo R. Tomson who has become deeply in love with a girl in his junior year of high school. Leo is well known for his remarkable speed on the track and the respect he has for everyone around him. He has also become the main topic of everyone’s conversation. To him it seems like the whole school know his relationship, anything that happens there is always some “other guy” to comment on it. The fact that he was 5’7 and has an amazing body and smile made him most ladies fantasy guy. Even though this was true Leo only stands for one lovely name….Coralline May. Woodlyn.
Coralline May. Woodlyn was actually the shyest person you could ever meet. She had a sexy diva look but her personality was the opposite of conceded. She was cautious of her surroundings due to her past, dealing with the abuse from her mother. Everyone knew this and tried to comfort her but nothing seem to help. There were just two people she opened up to, which were Leo and Tianna. Tianna and her been friends from they were in the third grade and they have never parted since. Coralline trusses Tianna with everything and when they are together, they were an unbreakable team. This was because Tianna also had been through neglect and sexual assault from her father. Tianna might have been loud and likes to brag, but the only thing she loves more than anything, was clubbing. She would go at least four times a mouth. She swore not to smoke or drink but every time she was out with a friend. They say that “she leaves with someone else acting woozy and looking high“. If it wasn’t for Caroline being so sweet and caring for her friend people in school would have tormented Tianna for hoeing around. It is said that relationship could end but friendship lases forever……but is that true?
Chapter one
True love
“It’s just a fire drill”, a loud muffled voice echoed through the ghetto setting of Phoenix high. Teens scrabbled
As they tried to find their safest rout out. “AH YO LEO!!!” a figure in the distance cried out as it rushed across the class. “Oh what’s sup Keith”, Leo answered. Keith was also a Tomson, matter of fact he was Leo’s younger brother. Keith always stood by his big brother’s side no matter what. If he had relationship problems he was there, if he needed money at the right time Keith had his back. No one would ever cross path with the Tomson’s knowing that they were one of the well-in-shape guys in school. So people knew after your face got beating in by Leo your chest would have been stomped on by Keith.
The whole school was now gathered outside awaiting further instruction. As they waited the sound of emergency engines with there loud sirens blasted to the scene. “We all know who did this” muttered one of the fire fighters as they ran towards the building. Keith whom was standing near by turned to Leo, “what do you think he meant by we all know who did this” he asked. Leo looked at him and smirked, “think about it”.
“Oh I know who you talking bout now”
“See it’s easy to realize who”
The weather was blazing hot and all were gathered around Phoenix high. The fire seemed to be harmless and would be easy to put out. Even though every one knew who started the fire no one had the balls to step to him. He was a messed up spoiled kid with the obsession for chaos. Everyone knew him by the nick name Twin but his real name was Taron Blacks. His parents owned a wealthy Satellite company called I.S.I (Intelligence Space Inc.) so he was well known and filled with pride. He had many tattoos but he was the romantic badass in school. He seems to only want power to make every male fare him and ladies want him. He was …“I do what I feel like kind of guys“. The school tried to get rid of him but it seems that each time they try. The more computer, gear….lets just say the more wealthy Phoenix high became.
Keith rubes his fingers through his hair “This is so stupid, we have a fire drill every month”. We
- by Xx_YukioblueAkira_xX |
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- | Submitted on 05/04/2009 |
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- Title: my story
- Artist: Xx_YukioblueAkira_xX
- Description: the romance
- Date: 05/04/2009
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- Cookies-N-Scream - 05/29/2009
- I love your characters. They're something new, and they excite me. They make me want to see either their downfall or ascent. However, you made silly spelling errors and had pour grammar in places. This isn't very advanced literature. Then again, i have high standards. You're reaching the boarderline of writting in a high register, however you need to deepen your use of language and punctuation at the same time. Good luck.
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