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Chapter 1:The Beginning
A long time ago,in the dark ages of time,six clans ruled the land.
Fireclan,Windclan,Iceclan,Shadowclan,Thunderclan,and Earthclan.These mighty
clans had the power to destroy mankind and rule the universe,but when man
had arrived on Earth,they took over and destroyed all existance of the clans.
Ages passed and the clans returned ,to take back what was one theres
Chapter 2:Iceclan
I was born in a clan named Iceclan.A clan of pain,hunger,and sorrow.It was winter,the year of everlasting snow.There were hardly any prey in this time of year,making it difficult for us."Whitefang!Stop fooling around and find some prey!""Yes Iceclaw."I ran down into the River of Life,a small river with lots of fish,and brought back two fish for the pile of fresh kill.I got myself a
fish and went to talk with my dad."Dad,can I go out into the open?""NO!Theres
nothing out in the open,stay here!"My dad,Whitewolf,never liked me the day I was born,he said I would just be trouble.My dad even lies to me all the time.
Nothing ever happens in my clan,except for meetings about what to do every
summer and winter.I just wish something exciting would happen,something that would change my life,forever.
Chapter 3:The Other Clan
"Hey Whitefang,I'll fight you!Whoever says uncle loses!""Your on!"We wrestled all the way to the finish when we stumbled across The Bridge
to Nowhere.All of a sudden,we fell into the River of Life and were swept away
by the currents,screaming,but no one could hear."Uh,were are we?"We were on the side of the river,cold and wet."Lets find our way home Whitefang,I dont
wanna stay here forever.""Sure thing Warheart."We were walking when a giant red gleam of light in the sky shone like the sun.We followed it,and on the other side,lava and rocks on the ground,and dragons all around.It was......
another clan.
TO BE CONTINUED
- by mkwhitefang |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/27/2009 |
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- Title: Fighters:The Clans Unite
- Artist: mkwhitefang
- Description: This is my first fiction story.So please dont write any bad comments.Just comments about errors please or nice things.
- Date: 04/27/2009
- Tags: fightersthe clans unite
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Comments (5 Comments)
- jerk and dougie - 08/09/2010
- Clans Unite!
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- Axel-BladeofDestiny - 04/30/2009
- WOAH!best story ive read yet awsome but u have some errors dude
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- Naruto-Demon of the Fox - 04/30/2009
- woah this story is awsome i wonder wats gonna happen next
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- MarukawaBubbleGum - 04/27/2009
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sweet! i like it! now for the error...xD theres only two i see..
1) start a new line [enter] wen someone else speaks
2) use spaces after some " signs because it gets confusing and looks crammed up
anyway..ANOTHER CLAN?! WATS GONNA HAPPEN? A FIGHT?! A HAPPY PARTY GREETING?! maybe the dragons are gonna chase after them and try to kill them...oooo i wanna read the next one 3nodding - Report As Spam
- Conejita-Azul - 04/27/2009
- this is good! lil bro!
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