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Boom!! Boom!! Our hearts beat rapildy. The six chosens one were being born. Three boys, and three girls. The three boys came out with a birth mark on the back, and at the same place. But one of the girl had the same mark as the boys. But the two other girls had the same mark, but the mark was on the front. The mother thought it was a curse.
She named her children Tony, Eduardo, Donald, August, Jessica, and Jordan.She belived that Jessica, and Jordan are cursed. Each and everyone of us had our own element. Tony's element is ice. Eduardo's element is fire. Donald's element is earth. August's element is wind. Jessica's element is thunder. And last but not least Jordan's element is water.
Fithteen years later our mother passed away. We learned ho to use our powers. But Jessica, and Jordan is always ahead. They learned all the elements. We tried to stop Jessica, and Jordan. But they were to powerful. We couldn't stop them with our powers. Jessica, and Jordan ran so quickly that they knocked us out in less than a minute. Their legs were so fast that it left marks, but if you look at the florr it leaves sparks. That could olny mean one thing their element is thunder.
They ruled half of the earth. They named their clan "Cursed". We had over one-hundred battles we nevered won once. They were to powerful. We know that the war is never going to end.
- by killerviper3370 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/25/2009 |
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- Title: Final Dreams
- Artist: killerviper3370
- Description: This is a story from my dreams its preaty cool if you read it some part are really and it really happened to me.This is the Prolouge of my story.
- Date: 04/25/2009
- Tags: final dreams
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ninja Baby Blues - 08/31/2009
- I agree with Kassarie, spelling and grammar need work, but it is a good storyline.
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- RockOnGirl12 - 06/26/2009
- It is awesome but you need to work on grammar and your sentences and it would be awesome if you wrote more
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- lucifer2012 - 05/12/2009
- Work on how you write your sentences at least, man. And have you been watching too much anime lately?
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- crazy_life247 - 05/12/2009
- awesome!. i think u should add more to the storry.
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- _-Kassarie-_ - 05/12/2009
- it needs a little work (spellin, grammar so on) and work on the form a little but other wise its good
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- hotviper3370 - 05/03/2009
- Good Job!
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