Will it end? Part 1

• Artist: Muste01
• Description: I just thought of this
• Date: 04/09/2009
• Tags: making country

It was dark, a night so dark only Zues knows what lurked in the shadows.In fact he did. It was a small Telkehine. "Have you found it?"said a deep voice from behind him. This caused him to jump."K-K-K-Kronos....I-I-I-I didn't see you there."
"Well you expect me to walk up like a mortal?"
"N-N-No sir. Sorry sir."
"Have you found it?"
"No sir its hard to find."As the Telkehine said that he disinagrated into a pile of dust."Damn Telkehines,can't trust 'em."He walked off into the night as John walked into the light.

Comments

[Smelylatata]

this is awsome.!^^
nice.

[humpty_bumpty]

it's good, but it needs to be longer, yea and like adrian said put more god and goddess in and expand expand expand and i think it will turn out to be a really good story man

[J-Dx1]

I think you could've used more writing and more god and goddess and titan action but i give it 8/10

[Muste01]

hope u like i can smell a new fan on the winds