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minor note sarah speaks ,Striker speaks
Monster World chapter 2 "Striker the Heroic Elf"
As I said before, the mysterious boy moved in for a closer look at the strange girl who he just saw fall from the sky. The only parts of her he could see from such a great distance away was her hair color and her dress. He knew he had to get close enough to see her face and besides, it's not everyday that you see a girl fall from the sky. Who is that kid and how did he or she fall into the pond? the thought to himeself as he was getting closer to the young lady.
As sarah wondered through the field she got the feeling that someone was following her. Hello? is someone out there? She called out and the young boy hid when he heard her voice. That voice, it sounded like a girl's voice. He though to himself realising her voice had the kind of tone to it that could only belong to a girl. Realising what she just asked, he decided to answer back. Yes im out here. The boy's sudden callback startled sarah as she didn't expect to hear a responce and it caused her to jump back abit and she almost dropped her bouquet. Who said that? Show yourself! She call out in a nervous but commanding voice.
With that the boy came out of his hiding place, wondering what her reaction would be. Now he was able to get a good look at her. She had ocean blue eyes, purple/violet hair, her skin was almost pale white and striker almost blushed at the sight of her, while sarah was relieved that it was a boy following her. She got a good look at him, he had light brown hair, bluish-green eyes and he looked like he was around her age but what really caught her attention was his pointed ears, they spooked her abit but she calmy asked him. Who are you? What are you? He answered My name is Striker, im an elf warrior. What's your name? She heard his question and answered. My name is Sarah, im a human from Winchester. Hmm? i've never heard of humans and where's winchester? Striker said, confused and curiously. I don't know where winchester is at the moment, so im a little lost. Sarah said. Striker thought hard on how could he help Sarah and immediately got an idea. Hey I know who can help you Sarah. Really? she said with hope in her eyes. Yeah, my master Koji, he's smart and wise, and bound to know where winchester is. he told her in responce to her question. Yaaaay. Please take me to him! She said in excitement. Alright Sarah. Follow Me! he told her.
She followed him and so began a good friendship. Will Koji and Striker really be able to help Sarah find a way back home? Find out in Chapter 3-Meeting Koji.
- by clayman0302 |
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- | Submitted on 04/06/2009 |
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- Title: Monster World chapter 2
- Artist: clayman0302
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This picks up where chapter one left off and yes i know that the last one didn't have very many words from sarah but hopefuly this'll make up for it.
P.S. I color coated their words so that it'll be easier for you all to tell who's talking and who isn't.
Enjoy and please comment. - Date: 04/06/2009
- Tags: monster world chapter
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Comments (4 Comments)
- clayman0302 - 05/06/2009
- thank you very much ^^
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- emo-poppy - 04/15/2009
- its good i like it^^!!
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- Sweet Clara01 - 04/09/2009
- Its different, how you've used different coloured text for the speech.
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- clayman0302 - 04/07/2009
- Sigh, I wish somebody would read it.
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