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Jeffrey was mad, at Myra. She would always neglect his love. every time they fought, he remembered the cuts she made on her face for thoughts of Jeff using her to get over his ex. He promised his sister he would leave her, he waited for her to leave him. he couln't take the negitivity from her. Eventualy his opaque dream came true. They parted. He never heard from her again. Cheaking every day to see if she lied about leaving Gaia forever, she didnt...
The last thing he told her was,"Get over it! I"m just a guy from the internet!!
OMFG!!!". At the time, Jeff was emo to, thats why they went out in the begining. Being emo he did the improbable...,"here's an idea! how bout' you i give you my address so you can track it down and kill me!!!" Bad mistake......
Jeff arived home tired from karate training, in the gettoh area of Prescott Valley, he always feared his house would be vandilized in a way. It hasn't so far. As he entered, he noticed the lights on. He walked to his room. He grabbed the knob, it was warm. He then heard moaning from his room as if someone was hurt. He readied his orange belt karate skills. He opened his door vigilantly, there was a woman on his bed. She stared at him like a lion at his pray. He recognized the face somewere, as he recalled she spoke,"Ay mihoh, te extrangye." As she said that, the face was scanned and analyzed. When Jeff and Myra went out, she sent a pikture of her. sure enough it was. That was three months ago. She looked different, it was the scars all over her face. He closed the door as if nothing happened. He jogged to his parents room, as he did, there was a fowl stench of....somthing. He couln't tell, he's never smelled it before. He ramed the door as he went in gaging, this was the smell. His parents undetailable anywere were dead, stabed to death. He pondered." They dropped me off an hour and a half ago, how could they decompose so soon?" He looked at the wounds in dispare...judgeing by the length of the peircengs, she used a kitchen knife. The door behind him creeked open. He shed a tear in respect for his parents, espescialy his mom, the last time he saw her was when she dropped him off at karate, when he yelled at her for not cooking lazanga, stupid anger for a stupid man... He turned around with an engulfing rage of desperality to kill her. Before he did anything, she pullled out a red dreanched knife. He posed into fighting stance. with only one word to say, she swung the knife down ward, tward his chest,"TOGETHER FOREVER MY LOVE!!!"
Simple enough he did his knife defence, he almost broke her wrist. Wishing he did, he kicked her hard out of his way to his room, he had to fight fire with fire. He didn't want to use a kitchen knife, they weren't his "style." He unsheathed his flat tipped survival knife he stole from a guys truck who he let his step-dad borrow. Turning around, she leaped at him. Screaming in pain from the kitchen knife burrowed in his shoulder, he shouted,"YOU STUPID BI-" He coulnt finish the sentance, the knife drilled in deeper. In hesitation, he stabed her in a hug kind of fasion. Deafend from her screaming, he pulled it out and stabbed another part of her back. Jeff threw her on his bed. He sprinted for the door, he didn't bother to call the police, he hated them. He perfered handleing it himself. He got to the door.....jeff stared at the door with grief. "the knob's gone?!?" He closed his eyes...they stayed shut, he couln't open them, litteraly. Strangly enough, he felt air under his eye lid....the lights were out. She had help. He syphend his darkness training skill, or what he had. He closed his eyes, figured he wouln't need them he listend, he heard her breathing... He felt up the walls to get to his room, he needed a flash light. He passed by his sisters door, fearing she was dead too. "She's dead to." He ran tward his room. He knew he passed it because of the wall being mad at him and hitting him in the face. He swung the knife as he turned. The air bled. Jeff opened his door, there was light coming out of his newly broken window. Some one else is in th-, Jeff was stabbed in the lower stomach...
End of Chpt. one sweatdrop
- by Dr Hapyfingrs |
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- | Submitted on 03/19/2009 |
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- Title: Literal obsetion.
- Artist: Dr Hapyfingrs
- Description: its what happens when you break up with a mentaly ill emo chick in the fricken edge...
- Date: 03/19/2009
- Tags: literal obsetion
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Caged Lark - 01/01/2010
- You should check for spelling errors and re-read your story before posting it so you know everything is right. Not a bad start though ^_^
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- Helper no37 - 03/28/2009
- omg babe you are sooooo ausome at writing like better then me WAY better then me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its sooooo fricken good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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