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...........Cold...............Dark.............Alone..................Hallow Deep Inside The Heart Of A Lone Girl..................Kiromi Higochi.....
Two years have passed sence the move for Kiromi's departure to Germany to improve her current grade which was an average of a 4.0. Her fauster parents wanted more besides gust grades. She had to prove to them that she could become the succsesser of their finantual company, which was a powerful and rich organaztion. " She shows talent, but she lacks emotion. " A buinisess man decused with her fauster father. " Did something, happen before she moved to Germany? " he asked. Her fauster father varaly explained. " Well, yes. Yes something happened. However, if she is to surpass anyone, she must forget those who care to much. " Outside of the door, a beautiful, young woman, about 17, clinched her fist and a shadow covered her face. Her whispers were covered up the rain outside. " Will see who forgets who, Father! " And a strike of thunder flashed across the huge glass window, followed by a slight crackle noise and boom. Then the woman walked away from the door vishously and down the hall. Second door on the right, she opened it quietly as slight creaks escaped. She closed the door and walked over to her dresser. Pulled the 3rd droor from the bottom and slid it open. The woman rumaged threw her dresser droor and found a small compartment. She opened the seceret compartment and pulled out a black wand with the letteres ingraved in japanese ' Ki.Hu. Then a green glow apeared at the tip, exposing her face from the shadows. She then whispered as her face showed completly now. " I coming back, Karou, Matoko, Nyoko! " and her face showed absolute seriousness.
- by B i o N i g h t |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/22/2009 |
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- Title: Coming back!
- Artist: B i o N i g h t
- Description: Its about a young girl who moved away from her origanal home town, and has had a dieing wish to return to her friends.
- Date: 02/22/2009
- Tags: coming back
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Cyborda - 10/01/2019
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Nice! I can see the whole scene!
Where's the next part? biggrin - Report As Spam
- 1-800-krabby-patty - 02/28/2009
- so completely unique you got talent and I usually crush writer's spirits but not with story make a sequel
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- XXxxKarimaxxXX - 02/26/2009
- its good, a nice change from the really long ones i've read so far
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- B i o N i g h t - 02/25/2009
- COmments are allowed if you like! I would love to hear your oppinion!
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