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Intro
do you believe in magic? the one thing everyone wants. the thing that can help or hurt you. the thing that can be so close to you but not close enough for you to touch it? i didnt until last year. the year that changed my life forever. i was your some what avrege12 year old girl. smart, funny, weird, crazy, and unpopular. i had a few good close friends and i was fine with that. they were Penny, a fun, happy, smart, out going girl, Maxi, a girl who isn't afraid to break the rules, and Janelle or AKA Aqua, a quit girl who gets very crazy when she has sugar. these were my three best friends and together we had and adventer we will never forget.
me
Maxi
AQUA
Penny
Chapter 1
it was a normal Friday morning at Bristo Middle School. Aqua, Penny, Maxi, and i were discussing what we would be doing that night. suddenly all the sounds of voices aroud us stoped. we all turned around thinking Ms. Wiltlock had started class and we were not ready. but instead of the everyone in there desks, everyone was frozen in place. Maxi, being her useual self, walked up to the closest person and started pocking him. Penny rolled her eyes at Maxi and Aqua wisperd to me "Rose, whats going on?" i wisperd back, "i have no idea." in a worried tone. suddenly a massive black hole appered in the center of the classroom. out of it came a butiful woman in a long white silk dress. we atomaticly stepped back with scared, shocked expresons, except for me, now relizing my parents were telling the truth. the woman walk to us and said in a soft voice, "i am Sakura, a goddes from the world Sumia, and my people need your help."
Sakura
Chapter 2
Maxi said in a scared voice, "you have the wrong girls. leave and we'll pretend this never happend." Sakura smiled and said, "no, i dont have the wrong girls. i guess your parents never told you the story." "what story?" Aqua said in a scared voice. Sakura replied by saying, "the story of that they are all from Sumia. you see, your parents are out top military soulders and came to earth to investigate. you are there off spring and have even more power than they. lets start with you Rose, shall we. your mother has psycic powers and your father is a devil-angel so you are a psycic devil angel. and you, Penny, have wind and earth for your dad can control earth and your mother wind. and Maxi, your father controles fire and your mother lightning so you have lightning and fire. and Aqua, your name fits right in because you controle water and ice. as you may have guessed you got it from your parents." "What? thats not true!" Penny said in a confused, stern, angey voice. "its true." i said, deffending Sakura, "my parents told me all this but i didnt believe them. i do now." "at least try to see if you have powers. and if you dont then ill leave." Maxi rolled her eyes and said in a sarcastic voice, "boom, fire." right in front of her then was a burnigh fire. Maxi's eyes widened in fear. Aqua scaredly put her hand next to the fire and wisperd, "Water?" and sure enough the fire was put out by a splash of water that came from Aqua's hand. Penny had made her way over to some plants and was making them grow with a wide smile on her face. then i steped into the middle of the room and closed my eyes. suddnely i felt somthing pushing through my back and then two, large, black wings sprouted out. i lightly pushed myself ito the air and spun around with a grin on my face. Aqua asked, "how?" Sakura answerd, "anything is posible with magic. we were given these powers by a group of pixies who asked us to help them fight with them and in reward gave us these magic powers." i wasnt really paying atention to wat they were saying. i was to cought up in the feeling of this masive power burning throgh me.
- by Little Miss Zy |
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- | Submitted on 02/19/2009 |
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- Title: More Than This World ch. 1-2
- Artist: Little Miss Zy
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a story of four girls and the discovery of there super natural powers and a path they must choose.
some of the chapers are short and puncuation, grammer, and spelling may not be perfect. i may not finish the story but most likely will. PM me if you want me to try to speed up the time it takes to post chapters and i will try to. enjoy. - Date: 02/19/2009
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Comments (1 Comments)
- gir_invaders - 02/21/2009
- Nice. ^-^ All you need is some grammar checking and it's all good. :3 Also, Describe what each character looks like. Like lets say Aqua has 'long silky black hair that gradually strokes her fingertips. Her skin was pale witch harmonized perfectly with her bright silver eyes that held mystery and suspense.' You know, some thing like that. Just get down what everybody looks like. Other than the two things, Really nice story. I'd love to read everything you have and I'd love to help you if you nee
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