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It's dark... Very dark... In fact it's pitch black... Where am I? I don't know... I'm scared, yet somehow... very relaxed. A sudden bright light shines in my eyes. I begin to twitch in my eyelids. I hear voices... rather deep voices at that.
The voice is saying what sounds like: "Wake up dude! C'mon! Gonna get up or are you dead? D - E - D, Dead!"
Dude... That must be my name!
Somehow this voice sounds familiar... Better yet, I somehow understand the language and even the slang that was just used.
I start to open my eyes. The first thing I see is a clear, blue, cloudless sky. I then sit up but as soon as I get up a sudden sharp pain surges into my brain. I'm just glad it wasn't real. As I feel the pain my head falls straight back to the ground.
-THWACK-
I close my eyes.
I somehow don't feel the pain from my head impacted the ground, or even from when I first felt pain 0.382 seconds ago in my brain.
The voice is talking to me again.
But this time it has changed... into a rather soft, soothing one.
It says: "C'mon, up! Sit up or we can't help you!"
I sit up and open my eyes again.
I don't feel pain.
I see two people. One, a woman, and the other, a man.
I'm in their back yard.
They don't seem to be bothered at the fact that I am not in a place to which I know I belong.
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- Title: Dude
- Artist: PeiBack
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Description:
This is your life. As you read it, you see it, control it and (hopefully) end it.
All you know about yourself is that you are somehow appealling to what these things call themselves "HUMANS".
Should you wish to read more, simply post a comment saying wether you wish to be a hero or a demon among humans. Oh, yeah, please rate it too and while writing the comment please tell me what you like and dislike about it and how I can improve it. - Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: dude amnesia unknown hero demon
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Comments (7 Comments)
- supah-pryoz - 09/24/2009
- this was very creative. 1 for originallity. 1 for creativity, 1 for moderate size, and 1 for story
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- Autumns Song - 08/29/2009
- I like it! I want to be a demon too!
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- PeiBack - 03/06/2009
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Part two is coming soon ppls!
Patience! please!
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- iiLovePocky - 03/03/2009
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Oh,oh!*Raises hand*
I wanna read more and I want to be a demon!
This is very interesting,I really,really,really want to read more.Please!That'd be awesome if you published this.I'd buy it! 3nodding - Report As Spam
- PeiBack - 01/13/2009
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thanks
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- Haiizel Nut - 01/02/2009
- {C o o l} I'm not to good at writing stories peoms I am but if taht was a book I would read it l0l ;D
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