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We get to the door and Christina tries the door and it, doesn't open. I'm not
very shocked.
"Well this is just annoying! You think they would leave the door open. Am I
right?!" Christina pauses so I nod.
"You see even you agree with me. Well I guess we have no choice. TIME
to look for an open window! Lets head to that very dark corner first!"
"Is that really such a go-"
Christina, who was obviously ignoring me, started squealing with delight!
"Oh what good luck. I mean this window is open. I'm going to name this window
Fred." I just look at Christina like she is something else.
"Oh don't give me that look, I mean for a window Fred is a suitable name! I
mean you can't just name him something like Christopher, that's just funny
sounding. Fred is perfect for the common run of the mill window!"
The entire time Christina was talking she was prying open the window. Just
like on ques the window opens right when she was done with her rant.
Christina, well, she is strange and I need that right now...
Christina pulls me through the window and I fall flat on my face. Christina
looks at me and starts laughing and then for the first time in maybe a year
I start to laugh too.
"See, what did I tell you! We just entered this place and already you are smiling!
I work wonders! Anyway let's explore."
I look up and were in a plain room with just a chair in it and one door leading out
into the unknown.
Christina heads for the door and I just follow her. Christina is acting like she owns
the place. Out in the hallway were at the long end of a L shaped hallway we look
in side multiple rooms and they all have only one piece of furniture. We get to the
end of the short part of what I'm now calling the L hallway and it heads down and
for a long distance and looks like it turns again. Christina speaks for the first time
in a half an hour. The silence had been strange and empty.
"We have been in here for an eternity," really only about 30min "and we haven't seen
him yet! arggg!"
I look down the hallway and humor Christina. "Christina when I'm done talking he
will appear." I wave my hands around like I'm making an incantation.
A few seconds pass and nothing happens. Christina sighs and turn the corner. I
began to follow then stop and hide behind the corner; I hear voices! i motion for
Christina and put my finger to my lips. The voices begin to get louder and I can
soon make out some of the words and tell the voices apart. One voice is dark
and makes your heart skip a beat, while the other sounds like he is
congested.
Sicky says something and Dark voice responds angrily.
"My lord, I-"
"No excuses this place had fallen to shambles while I was away! Do you think this
is acceptable?!" Dark voice roars.
"No, I'm sorry," Sicky falls to his knees "Please my lord forgive me, your most loyal
servant."
"Ha, you make me laugh servant, so I grant you... A quick death." At the command
of his voice the servant bursts into flames and screams so loudly I instinctively cover
my ears.
Dark voice, "Incompetent fool."
- by Redofcolor |
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- | Submitted on 12/24/2008 |
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- Title: Into the Unknown - Chapter Two
- Artist: Redofcolor
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Here's chapter two hope you enjoy!
P.S. If I have any spelling or grammar mistakes please let me know. Oh and I would love criticism. I get tons from my friends but more is always appreciated.
P.S.S. The Image was created using Tektek to represent Christina. In the next Chapter I will tektek what another character looks like. =) - Date: 12/24/2008
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- Clapper Cheeks - 01/10/2009
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I saw one capatalization error, but it was nice. 4/5
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