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Chapter 1: The Reviving Heart
Beep
“Is she alive?” a high female voice in a white lab coat whispered.
Beep
“I don’t know. Let’s take her pulse.” A low calm voice answered.
B-beep
“W-what are you talking about? She doesn’t even have a pulse!” the female voice typically shouted. “She’s typically d-”
“Hush. I hear something.” The low calm voice pressed his fingers to his lips, walking over to the monitor.
Nothing.
He frowned, crossing his arms across his chest.
Another failure…He thought, sighing, walking toward a table.
“Gosh. How long are we going to do this?” the female voice asked, sounding frustrated as she scanned through a bunch of paperwork with lots of unknown symbols scribbled on them.
“I don’t know.” The male voice muttered.
“We’ve been doing this for TEN years! What do you mean you don’t know?”
“I don’t know.”
“Is I don’t know your favorite phrase or what?!”
“Like I said I do-
Beeeeeep. Beeeeeeeep
The guy quickly shut up, looking up at the monitor and his eyes flickering toward the child on the operating table with many plastic tubes, and wires connected to her. I mean a LOT.
Hear that?” He asked, grinning as he saw the line on the computer monitor jumped rapidly up.
“Huh? Hear wh-”
Beep! Bee-beep! Beep!
The girl gave out a stifled gasp, covering her mouth, speechless.
“W-wow. I know. I can’t believe it either myself. We brought her back to life.” The low voice smiled, pleased that his experiment had succeeded. They made a legend come back to life.
Beep! Beep! Beee-p. Beeeee-ep.
Just in a few more days, she would be a normal kid. Just like every other kid on Earth. But after a few more years, she would go through a rapid change that’ll change her life.
He walked toward the child who looked like she was just taking a nap. A 149 year nap to be exact.
He smiled gently, his fingers brushing the dark bangs out of the kid’s face.
“Sheesh, it’s time you awaken, Alyza”
~To be continued~
- by Sakura_Jin_Tenshii |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: Chapter 1: The Reviving Heart
- Artist: Sakura_Jin_Tenshii
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XD It's a story!
...8D Well of course you should know that!
Resurrecting Heart Chapter 1: The Reviving Heart
It's basically about...well...um...a girl...that's um....um...>< You know what!?
Just READ and FIND out!
XD
Haf fun!
-Sa
P.S. XD If lots of ppl read this I'll go ahead and put up the next chapter! - Date: 12/23/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Salamoona - 03/12/2010
- I like it, and it seems to have a great start, but I kept seeing the word voices pop up a looooot. o.o Maybe if you changed the word voices to something else, then it'll be better. But this is an awesome start!
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- GAlA Site Developer 2 - 06/24/2009
- oh my.......
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- Sakura_Jin_Tenshii - 12/23/2008
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--; How does Alyza remind you of Ayu?
>< I'm not sure to post other stories here...
>< It's horrible like the story above!
T^T
>< Am! Read it! ..PLLLLEEAAASSEEE?!?!
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- Rini Pinja - 12/23/2008
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On no!!! SHE LIVES!!! O.O IT'S A GIRL VERSION OF FRANKENSTEIN!!! O.O La GASP!!!
xd Jk, it's REALLY good!!! sweatdrop Then again, since I say all your stories are good, you probably don't believe me sweatdrop
^^; Hopefully you're not in your writing block anymore. But you HAFTA continue it!! DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!!! - Report As Spam
- maxie_mitsuki - 12/23/2008
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XD yay! I'm the first to comment!! ....
For some reason Alyza makes me think of Ayu...
sweatdrop no i didn't ever read this.... ^^; then again i didn't finish some of the things that you told me to read... >< KOUMENEN!
Why don't you post the other things here? ^^ I'm pretty sure they'll be good here too. XD plus it's a waste of time and a get away from reality. the fun
~Lexa
P.S. ^^; sorry bout tellin... ya know.. >< i sorry!! - Report As Spam