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shinigami ep 1
haruhi:huh....where am i.... *gasp* darn i remember me and....hina we died in that fire...
grrr... i dont wanna remember it... well i guess i should find out where i am.... HINA!!!!!
hina: mmmm.... what stop yelling.. where are we anyway..
haruhi: i don know but lets look around and see what we can find
hina: ok...
???:HEHEHE.... SUCH TASTY LOOKING SOULS HOW SHALL I DEVOUR THEM....
haruhi: wha...? whoes there!?
hina: haruhi im .... scared what is that...
haruhi: i dont know....
at that moment the sinister figure stepped out of the darkness
a hollow a being of pure darkness... this one was particulary strong it's reiatsu was so strong that haruhi and hina dropped to the ground at that very moment weighed down by the power of its strong reiatsu.
hina: mfmfmf... said hina with her face plowed into the ground..
haruhi: what...?
she then raised her head but bareley
hina: i said i cant move!!!!!!!
haruhi: o gee.. ya think... anyway what r u ....?
hollow: HAHAHA.... I AM A HOLLOW I DEVOUR SOULS AS I PLEASE ETC ETC...
AND YOU TWO ARE NEXT KEKEKE...
haruhi: mm...hmm.. i...see... well...
hollow:SILENCE FOOL I SHALL DEVOUR YOU YOU SHOULD INDEED BE VERY TASTY.. HAHAHAH...!!!!!! BUT I GUESS ILL PLAY WITH YOU FOR A LITTLE WHILE
the hollow then fired his cero on haruhi and hina.
haruhi and hina: ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!1
*plip* *plip*
they both layed motionless on the ground blood drenched and steadly losing more blood.
haruhi: d..darn it is the end...
hina:...........
hollow:HAHAHAHA AND NOW TO CONSUME YOU SOULS HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
???: thats far enough....*slice*
hollow: ARGHHH!!!!!!!!1 M... MY ARM GRR... YOU WILL PAY FOR THAT..
just then a tall blue haired figure stepped in a ... shinigami..
haruhi:.... wha.. who are you....?
kyoshiro: kyoshiro miyazaki shinigami at your service *wink*
haruhi:*blush* w... well arent you going to get rid of that thing!!?
kyoshiro: hehehe... at once
hollow: YOU WILL PAY SHINIGAMI!!!!!!!!!!
the hollow then fired its cero at fullpower
hollow: TAKE THIS *crackleeeeee* ARGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
kyoshiro: hmph this is mere child's play for a shinigamiof my lvl shunpo!!! *swish*
kyoshiro moved out of the path of the cero and directly behind the hollow
kyoshiro: now this ends...
kyoshiro drew his zanpaktou from its sheath
REND MY ENEMY'S SOUL... TENSA-NI-KETSU!!!( TWIN SOUL CHAIN)
he shouted, activating his shikai revealing his zanpaktou's true form two long black cleavers flowing with his powerful reiatsu.
kyoshiro: now tensa-ni-ketsu ...... soukentetsu!!!!!!!!!(soul ripper)
TO BE CONTINUED
- by Classy Daddy |
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- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Shinigami
- Artist: Classy Daddy
- Description: just a little bleach fanfic i made awhile back
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: shinigami
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Comments (6 Comments)
- SunniEGertz - 08/17/2009
- Wow, this was kinda bad...I mean no offense but the spelling is off, it's mixed up in the beginning, confusing, you go from script esque form to regular writing in a split second or use both at the same time, 1/5
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- Siyaahi - 06/11/2009
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Sweet Otaku Girl:
Um,I think YOUR the one who's mixing it up.In japan 'soul reaper' is called 'shinigami'.Duh.Know your Japanese.Try to know the stuff your saying before your criticizing. - Report As Spam
- Hayli26 - 05/30/2009
- It was good. to sweet otaku girl: a zanpaktou is a soul reaper's sword each zanpktou has a different power
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- tkdman42 - 12/09/2008
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could be more descriptive. to sweet otaku girl...in japan soul reapers are actually called shinigami. dont crtisize till u know what ur talkin bout
i however thought it was decent. 3 - Report As Spam
- Kawaii Otaku Kun - 12/08/2008
- um i'm sry but it's not very good... it didn't make much sence a shinagami is a god of death....not a handsome white knight.....>_> and a zanpaktou? those belong 2 soul reapers.. it seems like u just mixed death note and bleach 2 gether....u'd think that with 2 great stories like that u'd make something twice as good but insead u made something awful..... redface
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