The triangle of love

• Artist: Jullialove
• Description: This little girl tried to be a popstar so that she hang out with the guy she liked
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: triangle love

This girl named Kenia was the cutest girl in the town. When she was walking to high school she saw a cute little turtle named Kame that was stuck on a tree.She climbed up to the turtle and then she cathed Kame but Kenia was about to fall. She tried to hold a branch as tight as she can but the branch broked and fall. Then this mysterious guy catched her and then his disguise fell to the ground and he was this famous rockstarbut kenia didnt notice. The guy told him his name was Shawn and give her a ticket to one of his show. He thanked him for rescueing his pet turtle and then put on his desguise and leaved. The next day she went to the concert and went to the back to see Shawn. A guy felled on her and got up. Kenia face turned red and she saw a tag on his arm that said staff. Kenia told him if he knew where Shawn was and the guy got mad with a jealous face. Kenia gived him the ticket and the guy ripped it and told her to go home. SHe did what he told him and got mad at him. When she went into her house, she saw a magazine with Shawn and that guy she hated the most. Then she read the book and was shocked that thy worked together and are rockstars. Kenia wanted to be famous like them too. She entered for auditioning for the dancers and so far she only saw guys................TO BE CONTINUED

Comments

[Little Milkflower]

More detail. I was kind of bored. You have to make a story yours, not a regular story that people have heard over and over and over and over. You get what I mean? You can P.M. me if you want me to clarify and/or if you have questions. I'd be more than willing to help you with anything you'd need.
Overall it was a good story line, but it needs to draw a person in.

[Kate will BRB]

Could do with writing the scenes out. This is more like a slightly inept story summary.