5 Deaths

• Artist: XxXCutie_Angel_RocksxXx
• Description: 5 girls dared each other to go in the haunted house across the street.Almost all of them died but one girl survived.Boy was she lucky but the others were in the house dead..........
• Date: 11/11/2008
• Tags: deaths

There were five girls who were having a slumber party and they dare themself to go to the haunted house across the street....So they all went to the haunted house.They found everthing green even the light on the chimney was green...Then they heard a creaking noise they were so scared expect one girl was saying "there's no such things as ghost"then the light went out and the girl that said there was no such thing as ghost died they found an knife on her fourhead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Next the 4 girls checked out the house and one said she's not afraid so she went to the bathroom all by herself and her friends heard a scream coming from the bathroom and they were so surprised.....






TO BE CONTINUED..........

Comments

[Ecclipze]

grammar check would be useful. I dont see the point, why are they still in there if one died? i didn't find it well written. sry maybe that wasn't your intention

[XxXCutie_Angel_RocksxXx]

it's really about that they found an axe on her forhead