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There once lived a man, about 6 ft.
He just bought himself a new house.
When he saw a stain right by the hall closet he tried to scrub it out.
But, since he failed to he put a rug over it.
That night while he slept like a little baby.
He was startled by a noise.
It sound like a little kid running down the hall.
He went to check out what it was and he saw a little kid about three years old running in the hall closet.
So, the next day he went to the library and got on the computer to figure out the backround of that house.
And this is what he found.
He found that a father had chased his little daughter down the hall and killed her in that same closet.
Comments (3 Comments)
- Jozhuwah Ben Zaiden - 02/22/2010
- Creepy. Itz nice for a ghost story type thing but itz kinda weird. No offense, but u need more detail, more plot. Otherwise itz just a creepy poem. Itz relatively good tho. smile Don't feel bad, this isn't rally my type of genre.
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- Scarlett Shizzle - 07/02/2009
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NICE.....
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- Go for Jo - 12/27/2008
- It was good, but next time, try to make it.... eh, longer 3/5
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