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~Chapter 1
I heard the squealing of my friends. Who had slept over the weekend, so we could beauty ourselves up for the first day of school. Little Annabel, jumped on my back. "wakey wakey Alex!!!! Come on we have to leave for school soon, and you have to look good for the first day!" she said, sounding like a little girl. I sat up, stretching my arms and let out a long yawn. "okay okay, im waking up........" i mumbled.
I sat there at the edge of my bed, looking at my 4 friends you looked really prettied up today. Emily wore a pink summer dress, that looked perfect on her. Her hair was straightened and looked very soft, her green eyes seem to twinkle with all the excitement in the room. She had long muscular legs and a long neck, we all thinks he should be a model. She wore pink sandals to match with her dress. "hey, alex you should wear this" she said digging into my closet and pulled out a pair of shorts and a cute t-shirt. I just shrugged, not really caring about what i'd wear just yet. I turned to looked at Crystal and Grace, they sat beside each other, one was putting on some eyeliner and the other was tieing their hair into a tight ponytail. Grace finished her eyeliner and looked over at me, giving me a kind smile. Even though she was so nice, her gray eyes startled me sometimes, it was like a storm was actually in them. She wore a jean jacket over a white blouse and a mini skirt. Her hair was pulled back with a head band. Crystal on the other hand, had tight shorts on and a tank top, she looked like she was ready for a run. She dressed simple but it looked amazing on her. Crystal looked up at me and raised an eyebrow. "go take a shower i can smell your stink from over here" she said jokingly as she plugged her nose. Grace furrowed her eyebrows. "Crystal, dont be so mean!" she scolded Crystal and i just laughed to myself. Then i noticed Annabel still sitting besides me. "Crystal!" she said then turned to me. "you dont stink, but you still might want to take a shower." she said a smiled growing on her face. I finally noticed what Annabel was wearing and how her hair was placed. She looked like an angel!!! Her wavy brown hair was in perfect curls today, they bounced beautifully on her shoulders. I blushed a bit and smiled at her cute dress as well.
I took a shower and when i came out i had blew my hair dry and wore a graphic tee and some bermuda shorts. Since my hair was dried i decided to straighten it. I hated my curly hair so much. When my hair is straight its much much longer than my shoulder. I threw on some make up quickly. "okay you guys, lets get some breakfast, then we can make guys fall to our feet" i placed my hands on my hips and smiled at my 4 bffs, all their crammed in my little room.
We arrived at school in front of the old brick building. "it looks as ugly as ever....." Emily said crossing her arms and heading towards the entrance. Crystal was beside her and smirked at her remark. I rolled my eyes, i could sense something bad about to happen.
- by hsdoihdubwobaldbfcudwfb |
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- | Submitted on 10/27/2008 |
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- Title: Crazy for love ch.1
- Artist: hsdoihdubwobaldbfcudwfb
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lets see whats gonna happen on the Girls first day of school.
Emily-violet
Crystal-blue
Grace-purple
Annabel-orange
Alex-Limegreen
- Date: 10/27/2008
- Tags: crazy love ch12
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- Blackfire Banshee - 12/22/2008
- more plz!
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- PrincessNicaPInk - 10/28/2008
- continue writing
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- Nerai Kentouken - 10/27/2008
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you don't need to color code the dialouge, simple put "blah blah blah!" Droned Emily
"OMG!" screamed Crystal
"what was that?" asked Grace, a bit firghtened.
"it's me!!" said Annabel, poking her head from around the corner.
"i swear i heard somthing else." said Alex, crossing her arms.
you can play a bit with various adjitives.
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