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I ran Throught The pouring Rain of the Forest. The cuts on My arm was bleeding nonstop Through My shirt, The chains Clanged And Rattled On my wrist making them Hard To run with. But I still Was going To run From Them.The Forest Wasn't That big, Big enought To make An Attept
To lose My Purtisures. And I had To make An attempt. I didn't know Where The Nearest Town Was. Knowing There Resourses They Would Find me in The matter Of Days. I looked back ,I Imediately knew I needed To run Faster. Five Black coated Men Where only 20 Yards Away And getting Closer. Running in a Triangle formation That looked Like They Where born To Pursuit Escapees. The forest grew thicker With everypasing tree. I pushed myself Further, I turned Past A row Of bushes And Hid Behind A Large Tree. I tried To Make my Gasping breaths Quieter.
"Split Up and Bring The girl Back To me. " A large deep Voice commanded The men.The rain Started To fall Harder Making it Impossible to see in trough The darkness. I could stil Hear The commands Of Them Being made.
Seconds became Minutes As I Stayed in my spot Wating for the Sounds Of the wind to stop And Finding the men gone.
I suddenly Felt A cold metal weapon touch my Accrossed neck.
I stoped Breathing. "Trying To escape Where you know?" A Ghastly girl voice whisperd Into my ear. The rain Lightend As If It where Helping the men Find me.My nails clung into the tree, The coated Girl Grabed The back Of my neck And Forced me away from the tree He draged me acrossed The wet ground,As I refused to walk.
"Ah ,Here we are again. This sence Looks Familiar."The Commanding One of the group said as I enterd There eyesight. "when We first found you, I Expexted You wouldn't be That desprate to escape. Though I am Curious On how You got thse chains to break."
The tallest One Approched me, His yellow Eyes Glowed From Under the shadow of his hood."Number Twelve You can let go of her now"
The Woman lowerd Her weapon, And let go of my neck.The leader grabed my sleevet and Forced me to his side.
I suddenly Had The nerve to speak. "Go To hell!" I tried to yank My arm back Fom the Man. A long red Light spear appered Only inches fom my neck, I could Feel the Heat raidating fom it.
"Now now, There. You don't want us to use Deadly Force now do We?"
The man Had shakels on me, and pushed me along the path.They All suddenly stoped.
"number Twelve?"One of the men asked I looked back to see what They where talking about. The woman who Apprehaneded Me Was stading still. Her eyes Under the Shdow Glowed A dull Gray. She suddenly sell foraward. REvealing a Tall Teenager behind her in A black Cloak. He Smiled When His eyes Met mine.The three Other men Did not hesitate To attack The Boy.The man Behind me Griped My sholder tighter. The boy was Sddenly Standing only feet away from us.I noticed The 3 other men On the ground Out cold. The boy still had a smile on his face, He lifted His hat To reveal His eyes In the shadow Of his hat. LIke the men His Eyes glowed A breathtaking Sky blue In the shadow.
"What is it that you want? If it seems That Important."The manTightend His grip on my shoulder.
"The Girl." The boys Soft Voice said, In his hand was a weapon I coudn't make out. It looked like a sword ,But It looked like a key At the same time.
"I belive thats out of the option."The Stern Voice Behind me said.
"it's Either She comes with Me, Or you loose Your life." The boy lifted his weapon and pointed it at The man.
Why did This man have such And intrest In Me?
The man chuckled behind me.
"Let us dance then"
Both of them Where fighting the next second. I couldn't see who was wining, All I could hear was metal clanging.
Suddenly The boy Grabed me And flung me on his back and ran. He ran much faster The other men Or me.
The trees went by at deady speeds.
He put me down as he stoped in front of a lake.
"Are you all right?"The boys soft Voice asked as he tried to undo my shakles on my wrist.
"I-I'm fine"The shackles Suddenly fell on my wrists.It took me a second to realize Because I was staring into The Boys eyes .
"those men Are Dangerous, Deadly even."The boy took off His hat And Reavealed his short Golden Hair As he shook His head to make his layers point down and in diffrent derections. I stared At him. He raised an eyebrow.
"who are you?" I asked
"You don't Remember?"He asked Surpised
"Am I sposed to?" If I ever have met him before I would Definately of rememberd him.
"Hmm... It seems those men did more to your memory than I thought"
"My memory?"I was confused
He noded And Placed a stray strand of my hair back in place.
"what Do you remember Before Those men captured you?"
I opend My mouth To speak , But I Suddenly Didn't even know what had Happend Before They captured me.I stood there trying to remember But I could Remeber So many little things. I closed my mouth
"uhhh.."
"hmmm, Figures"He Stabed His weapon into the ground And Undid his knuckle High gloves And pulled them it off.There on his middle Finger Was a gold ring.
"REmember this?" He droped it into my hand.
It looked like a regular ring.
But inside There was something Ingraved inside the ring ,There I saw my name. I looked At the Golden Haird boy Is confusion.
He tilted His head "Do you rememeber now?"
I shook My head. He sighed and He took The Ring out of my hand and placed in on my middle finger. "Now?" He Asked
I stared At him dumbfounded.
He growled And leaned down to my face ,Only an inch away.
"How Bout' now?" Then he softly kissed me.
He pulled away, I stared ay him even more, My face red.
It took me a second, Then I still Shook my head.
"I'm your husband ,you Twit."
- by The Thirteenth Promise |
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- Title: The angel eyes
- Artist: The Thirteenth Promise
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Just a Random Story I made Off The top of my head.
Sorry It's soo long.It may Confuse You too - Date: 10/25/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- The Llama Goes Moo - 06/29/2009
- I'm sorry. I tried to read it, I really did, but the capitalization of almost every single word, killed me. You might want to change the color of the font, too. It's too similar to the background color, and it's difficult to read.
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- Angeladr7 - 10/25/2008
- wow! That was really exciting and feeled with lots of suspense! I loved it. And the end was romatic yet funny! It makes me want to know more about the background story of these characters. You did an excellent job for random!!
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- iibleedrainbows - 10/25/2008
- Awesome And yourwelcome you commented my form well its really long but great i love it!!!
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