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I soared into the sky, feeling the jaws of an Eraser snap into the air behind me. Below me, many white-coats were yelling instructions to each other. Concentrating hard, I flapped my wings. I was really flying!
Hello. My name is Kyle. Yes, I know that's a boy's name. I just like it a lot. Why can't it be a girl's name, too? Anyways, I escaped from the School a few days ago. How, I have no idea. All I know is that I'm never going back.
Right now I'm in hiding. I heard at the School that there are six kids with wings like me that escaped, so that's what I'm planning to do. Find them and join them.
Unfortunately, there are about 50 Erasers prowling around right now, so I can't.
But, I'm not complaining. I need all the rest I can get right now. I'm enjoying the taste of freedom.
Brushing my black hair out of my eyes, I stood up. I was getting reeeally hungry. I need a lot more to eat than a normal human. Sighing, I stretched my wings and watched a black feather drift to the ground. My DNA had been mixed with a crow's, I guessed. I'm not really sure.
"...find her, I'm going to wring her neck." A voice drifted through the cave opening, making me freeze. Slowly, I backed into a corner and squeezed my eyes shut, concentrating. I remembered the lab experiment that had the power to become invisible.
The Eraser's came in, growling to each other. I saw their eyes sweep the cave, but they saw nothing. They turned an walked away. Sighing, I released my power. I became visible again.
That's my power. To copy other experiments powers.
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- Title: Maximum Ride Story
- Artist: Number15Xenon
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Hello, peoplez! I reeeally like the series Maximum Ride, and have been thinking of ideas for a story. Please comment! I really hope I get all of the information right.
The series Maximum Ride does not belong to me. It is the property of James Patterson. I only made up my character. - Date: 10/07/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ash-Max1 - 07/29/2010
- it 2 much like the book if the author reads it you might get reported but other than that its good
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- XxAngel_SChanxX - 04/30/2010
- That's cool.
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- pulchrare - 01/07/2010
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Wow! That was greak! As a Max fan, I must say that it was awesome. I wrote one about Max having another sister (Of Dr. Martienez and Jeb) but I lost it. *Sigh*
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Yes, but it was another test. Or did you read the middle chapters only? It was a test, because they found Total in book 1(or 2) and Total came back. - Report As Spam
- Bloodspill_Blackblood - 06/21/2009
- i liked it!if you wrote a book series with that type of idea? or maby your person needs to have there flock of there own and the character should have kicked there erasers asses and flew off that would be kool! ttyl! XD
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- Eby_3 - 02/12/2009
- I liked it , i didnt like the ending of the series any way, its like a side story kinda like heros tv series has a side story, Max anf the flock do let out a butt load of experiments and all, and its not like you said when this happend so the erasers could still be alive, sorry read a comment befor mine, any way ppl have no imgaination when it come to side storys based off of awsome books like MMR. biggrin
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- mitchell1167- - 11/25/2008
- not to rain on your parade but if u read the third book the flock never realy escaped it was all a drug induced dream and theres no erasers left exept ari and hes aboutto die so its relly good i give it a 3/5 for atleast trying but u should get your vacts strate before you make another one.
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- liverpool64 - 10/07/2008
- wots an eraser soz im thick lol its good nearly every kids dream life escaping frm skwl well done 3 star gd gd and more gd stories
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