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ANGEL ISLAND
My name is Knuckles the Echidna. it is my duty to guard the Master Emerald. It is usually a dangerous job With many enemys, but occassionally, something Inersting happens... * Man, yet another boring day* Knuckles thinks to himself. when suddenly, a portal opens above the Master Emerald, and sasuke the hedgehog(who knuckles thinks is Shadow) fell from it. He starts to wake up " shadow, Get OFF OF THE MASTER EMERALD!!", Knuckles said, " wut are you doing here any ways, Shadow? and wuts with the new look? to be honest... ur hair looks like a ducks backside." sasuke was thinking *WHAT?!* and got off. *Good,* thinks Knuckles, * he's off the eme-* "TEME!!!!!!!!!" Sasuke screams, and starts punching the poor guy. "...oowwww"Knuckles murmers. "hmph, what a weakling" says sasuke, and starts to walk towards Knuckles to finish him, and his headband falls over his eyes. * honestly, HE looked wierd...*Sasuke thought, when, his head band hits somthing on his face, that wasnt there. "Hm?" he takes the headband off and drops it. There, on his face, was a new, black nose( made for a hedgehog). *W-WUT THE -???????????*, he thinks, * gloved hands...paw-like feet...pionted ears...and...A TAIL?!?* "AARRGGGGHHH!!!!" he screams," WHAT IS GOING ON!?!"
THE FOREST
Sonic was going his usual path in the woods, when he finds somthing UNusual. " AMY!!" he thought he saw amy lying on the ground, and went back to it. it seemed like it was her, but with a different look....
OR WAS IT?!
to be continued...
- by Naruto Sonic Fan2689 |
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- | Submitted on 09/17/2008 |
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- Title: Crossed worlds - part 1
- Artist: Naruto Sonic Fan2689
- Description: ya, i get really bored. I got the idea of this from deviant art. PLZ GIVE FEED BACK!!! XD
- Date: 09/17/2008
- Tags: naruto sonic crossed worlds
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Naruto Sonic Sin2688 - 02/01/2009
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naruto Sonic Fan2689 was hacked!!
this is my ne account!! - Report As Spam
- SonicBoom679 - 01/30/2009
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ya i agree with annalexxi, but otherwise, i really like the basic storyline.
keep up the good work! =P - Report As Spam
- The Blessing of an Angel - 09/22/2008
- oh will you continue it?i like it
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- Annalexxi - 09/17/2008
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Okay so my advice is, as this is the writing arena you should try your best to write well.
Abbreviations such as u, r, ur, 4 and 2 are ... okay for when you're PMing or Iming someone, but in writing a piece of literature it isn't okay, you need to type out those words.
Other than that it was very confusing.
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