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She sat in the hospital in a bad condition with her brother beside her she felt good to see him. “Brother, promise me you won’t leave me.” She said looking at him with bittersweet eyes. “I promise sis I won’t leave” He sat beside her with a fake smile. He told her he would be right back just to check something, but when he left he talked to the doctor. “Please tell me she will be alright, please!” “I am sorry but she only has a few hours left she’s dieing” The news shocked him and he had no idea what to do so he sat by and waited for her to die. ‘God please don’t let her die not yet.’ Her heart started to fail. “Get her to the emergency room now!” The doctor pushed her to the room. “No, god, please not now!”
They worked on and on trying as hard as they could to save her but when it all was over nothing worked. “She’s gone…we lost her.” One of the nurses said. “No not yet!” The Doctor shocked her again and again. Nothing it didn’t work. “How, why, we tried everything but it didn’t work.” The doc leaned on the table.
The brother paced for hours waiting for her. The doc walked out. “We are sorry nothing worked.” He was crushed and started to cry as he walked into the room. He laid his head down on his dead sister. They left him alone so he could be in solitude. “Brother, why are you crying?” The sister leaned up. “Sis your OK I thought you were dead!” He hugged her as tears rolled down his eyes onto her back. ‘God, you saved my sister thank you?’ A nurse came in. “Sir?” She dropped the clipboard she was carrying. “By god it’s a miracle.” “Brother?” “Yes?” “Can I get dressed now?”
The hospital had a miracle and everyone knew it but they say god had heard the kid's cries and saved her life is it true maybe, maybe not, we may never know. All for sure something did happen to save her life whether it be medicine or prayer, love or lord, it was known that she was alive and that was all that mattered.
- by Dr Spangle |
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- | Submitted on 08/03/2008 |
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- Title: A gift from god
- Artist: Dr Spangle
- Description: A story thought up by yours truly to make you think if there truly is a god out there performing miracles right before our eyes. ((Based on a friend's encounter with death))
- Date: 08/03/2008
- Tags: godlifemiracleslove
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Comments (5 Comments)
- -[Kibi]- - 12/20/2008
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*teary eyed* :,)
a few grammar mistakes but great writing nonetheless! - Report As Spam
- Lokesonna - 12/16/2008
- Damn straight 3ccentric. This is a very nice story with much disperse feeling within it. I much enjoyed this, thank you.
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- 3ccentric - 12/16/2008
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Ok ZeldaCat he wasnt writing for you so stfu about the athiest thing not everyone needs to know.
This was really well writing and very touching im glad that i read this it was very amazing! - Report As Spam
- ZeldacatVampire - 08/03/2008
- Ok, honestly, I'm atheist XD but aside from that it was pretty good. You only missed two minor places to add a comma in but it was good. Might of used "He" abit too much. Try putting names or something to them.
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- Xkanon - 08/03/2008
- it was worth reading. Even though it was true the way u wrote it was really thought out. i suggest writing more details on wats happeing
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