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A mysterious figure walks along the very trail so many heroes before him took, behind him was a slaughtered band of goblins and ahead of him, the peaceful town of Solace.
Solace, the buildings were once built high up in great trees known as the Vallenwoods, but now, the buildings were on the ground, for many of the old trees were burnt and blackened by dragonfire during the War of the Lance. In fact the town of Solace had once housed the heroes of that war. Tanis, Flint, Raistlin, Caramon, Tika and Tasslehoff had all lived in this great town. He decides that he will take up temporary residence in a nearby inn, the inn of last home. As the 8 foot tall man enters the inn everyone falls silent.
The man has deep blue scales and sharp black claws, his face is shrouded by his heavy hood. As he moves toward the sheriff, the inn patrons part ways to let him through,
"Palin!", he yells.
"My friend!", the man who seems to be known as Palin shouts back. The frequent customers start to cheer, and soon everyone knows who the mysterious man is.
"Shalmir my friend, allow me to buy you a drink, any troubles on your journey?".
"Yes as a matter of fact I ran into a band of goblins on my way here, but I took care of them!" Shalmir tells his story of the battle with the Goblins, and many more about his journey. There were 'OOOOoohh's and 'AAAaaahhsss's coming from the crowded in while he regailed his tales of battle and heroism.
(That is all I got done, I'm suffering from writer's block at the moment and I just can't decide what happens next, ideas from Dragonlance readers are appreciated!)
- by ArchangelTsuya |
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- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: Dragon's Awakening
- Artist: ArchangelTsuya
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Description:
This is just a small pilot for a Fan-Fiction of Dragonlance I'm doing, please give me criticism on what I did wrong or what I can improve on please, I love writing and want to be better. I know the story seems like it requires more detail, but as you could probably tell, its a short story.
K.P. Pelletier - Date: 07/18/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ArchangelTsuya - 09/30/2009
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Dur it needs work xD
Do you see how tiny that is? I lost interest in the series I was writing. Then end, I can never hold down a series long enough. - Report As Spam
- BookWurm21 - 08/01/2009
- it needs work...
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- JoWolf - 07/20/2008
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ooooo awesome i like it lots =3 its so kewl x3
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- ArchangelTsuya - 07/20/2008
- I don't have him explain the details because I just didn't have time when I wrote this, its just a pilot for an idea for a book, still in the pre-brainstorming.. barely a piece of writing at all... I was sort of thinking of just skipping it and leaving it to the imagination.. but tying the battle into the story in the next 6 or 7 paragraphs. And no, I don't know you clairivaux_chris-.
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- illifent - 07/18/2008
- wow, u have a better opening then i generally do. why don't u have him explain details of the battle. smile
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- clairvaux_chris - 07/18/2008
- I think I know you... SHS?
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