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  • Only In Her Dreams
  • Title: Only In Her Dreams
  • Artist: The CheeseCrisp
  • Description: I liked the comments I got last time, so I thought I'd get some more constructive criticism. So, I know there are people out there that like ichirku ect, but I was just going by how Orihime likes Ichigo. And I know Ichigo's dumbface who doesn't acknowledge that, which is why I put that title ;P
    And I know Her boobs are supposed to be uhh bigger.
    Ok, so I hope you enjoy and give me some good feedback, thanks! Bigger version:
    http://sunnytheowl.deviantart.com/art/Orihime-s-Dream-160568078
  • Date: 04/21/2010
  • Tags: orihime ichigo
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • The CheeseCrisp - 04/25/2010
  • Oh yeah...I forgot about that curve there...I used to put it xD
    Thanks! Oh as for the nose, yeah I go crazy when trying to draw stupid umm...anime style?
    heh It's funny that you bring up proportions, they were actually shorter in the sketch and nobody noticed how odd they looked 'cept me. I'm glad you caught that too though. ^^
    Thanks again for the helpful comment, I'm still working on proportions, that's been my big thing lately biggrin
  • Mokitty - 04/24/2010
  • You might want to work on the proportions of your people. Heads tend to be smaller than that. Or you can think of it like the body is about 4 or 5 heads tall. It's good other than the ridiculous poofiness of Orihime's hair and the exaggerated curve of her nose... Oh! Remember the skin moving from the top of the neck to the chin. I'm not sure how to explain it in words, so go here: http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y205/Mokitty/Curvegood.png (or not, it's your choice)
 
 
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