- by kawaii-neko-chan-nya |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 06/16/2009 |
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- Title: Happy Father's Day
- Artist: kawaii-neko-chan-nya
- Description: i drew this for Father's Day. i feel it needs more but idk wat. help me if u can ^^ and give me criticism ^^ i cant improve if i dnt get the truth, so b brutal ^^
- Date: 06/16/2009
- Tags: happy fathers
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ceci911 - 01/08/2010
- i dont have a dad
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- luvmiroku123 - 06/18/2009
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using color would definately give you a focus spot. its all grey so its all just not popping out. pretty good use of shading. it feels like you should have colored the girl some, and then put like some sort of stencil-neat-looking-figure-thing around the smaller 'happy fathers day!'
but that may be just me. 4/5 - Report As Spam
- gatemansgc - 06/16/2009
- put some stuff in the background behind the girl, and maybe ADD SOME COLOR. that's about as brutal as i can get... domokun stargate
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