- by Ryo Sho Sen |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 03/25/2009 |
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- Title: Kiyomi
- Artist: Ryo Sho Sen
- Description: My Shinigami, My anatomy is screwy I realize that. Hopefully the next time you see her it will be a more anatomically correct drawing xD
- Date: 03/25/2009
- Tags: kiyomi bleach shinigami soulreaper bleach
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Hesper Moon - 06/12/2009
- Nice.
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- selaphim - 03/28/2009
- I think with a little more detail and the fixing of few flaws, this could be a 5/5! I love it. I'm a fan of Bleach too xD
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- ll_Your_Lost_Melody_ll - 03/27/2009
- 5/5 i think its nice nice coloring as well ^^
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- CaptainWarMachine - 03/26/2009
- Not bad, I see what you're doing here but I have to agree with moondoggy.. 3/5
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- Ryo Sho Sen - 03/26/2009
- thanks, : ] I realize there are flaws in drawing. For instance I think one arm is a whole lot longer then the other. Or it just looks that way to me. This is only my second drawing done in a paint program, so all other mistakes aside I think it went fairly well.
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- Moondoggy09 - 03/25/2009
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okay like the premise but there are a number of flaws
wind seems to be picking up the hair bu not the clothes
the waist is way to thin
her right hand is backwards
and katanas arent straight they have a curve to make the slashing motion more comfertable
I hope you take these comments as what they are meant for constructive criticisim designed to help you improve your next drawing 3/5 - Report As Spam
