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  • Dorm King pg07
  • Title: Dorm King pg07
  • Artist: DA_fuugen
  • Description: *can't comment anything*

    You can find the other pages in my gallery, or on smackjeeves.com

    Again, I did NOT steal this.
  • Date: 04/28/2010
  • Tags: dorm king pg07 anime manga
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  • TheNewLibrarian - 10/07/2011
  • Also, from a writer's standpoint, the story is too jumpy. It's like you're trying to rush it. Slow down and work on your skills.
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