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  • Radiant Angel Chapter 1 Pg 1
  • Title: Radiant Angel Chapter 1 Pg 1
  • Artist: Asastsuya
  • Description: Well hi there! This is, of course, the first page of many. I really wanted to put a comic here so this is the story line I chose...I guess. I would really like to hear your thoughts.

    (Oh and if you can't tell, Ai is being kidnapped in the last panel)

    I have another comic I want to try but I want your, the readers, approval first. I want to know if you'd read it before I draw it. lol ^^ well thnks!
  • Date: 11/21/2009
  • Tags: radiant angel chapter
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Asastsuya - 12/26/2009
  • Right now the story IS NOT SUPPOSE TO MAKE SENSE TO YOU!!! THATS THE POINT!!! lol 3nodding I did it that way on purpose.
  • Anemani - 11/25/2009
  • this is really awesome... great job on the backgrounds to me those are the hardest part to draw on the comics... along with lots of other things o.o...^^'
  • lince-x - 11/24/2009
  • Wow! It all looks perfect!
    About story. I think it can be interesting. At least I want to see 3rd and 4th pages yet, I think if a pair of frames more was here it would be better for easier story reading. The first additional frame - two persons walk together or two frames with big faces for understanding then here is TWO person. It's not obviously at first glance. And the second - a siluetta of guys behind this two talk about. Or something for understanding the last frame. (cont.on secnd)
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