- Title: Radiant Angel Chapter 1 Pg 1
- Artist: Asastsuya
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Description:
Well hi there! This is, of course, the first page of many. I really wanted to put a comic here so this is the story line I chose...I guess. I would really like to hear your thoughts.
(Oh and if you can't tell, Ai is being kidnapped in the last panel)
I have another comic I want to try but I want your, the readers, approval first. I want to know if you'd read it before I draw it. lol ^^ well thnks! - Date: 11/21/2009
- Tags: radiant angel chapter
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Comments (2 Comments)
- InfamousHobo - 11/22/2009
- One thing I had trouble distinguish on the last panel is that lady with the hood on. Is she she an armor plate or is that her breasts flopping out with no nipples? Also, I know her arm is behind the cape, but you could have draw a small part of the arm connecting to the body. This is not flaming or trolling by the way.
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- animelvr1112 - 11/22/2009
- i think the art is great!it seems like it would be a good story line but its kinda hard to understand wats going on.i think you should try making the wording a bit better.i giv it 4/5!
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