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  • Title: Shina
  • Artist: The Princess Sheik
  • Description: This is one of the characters in a manga I am starting. (yes they're the same person)

    I don't have a scanner so I took a picture. I hope its okay :)
    Please rate and comment !

    **I Auto-Fixed the drawing so some parts of the drawing are darker than other parts and vice versa.
  • Date: 07/30/2009
  • Tags: shina transgender manga
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Roku-pi - 12/26/2016
  • I love the concept! I really liked how you added detailing on the dress and the hair.
    However, the legs look a little too one dimensional.Maybe shade the back leg and slim it down a little more to add depth. Also, the shoulders looked squared almost like she should be standing with legs together. If you want that cute leg lift, maybe have her shoulders leaning a bit forward.
    Overall though, great job. ;D
  • Roku-pi - 12/26/2016
  • I love the concept! I really liked how you details in the dress and the hair.
    However, the legs look a little too one dimensional.Maybe shade the back leg and slim it down a little more to add depth. Also, the shoulders looked squared almost like she should be standing with legs together. If you want that cute leg lift, maybe have her shoulders leaning a bit forward.
    Overall though, great job. ;D
  • Juubei323 - 05/08/2011
  • I agree with Pieprsn2 the avenger and krystal ninja wolf...
    I dislike it when people put 5/5 when it's not even true. 2/5 from me.
  • iiRuedotsuki - 06/24/2010
  • it wouldve looked better if you kept her leg down and kept the males arm by his side instead of clutching the necklace...otherwise for no scanner this is good quality
  • Captain Critique - 06/14/2010
  • Okay, there is WAAAAY too much praise in this arena.

    I'm going to put it very bluntly: Your anatomy is is fail.

    Also, get a scanner. Ink your drawings. And why do I have the horrible feeling in the pit of my stomach that you write your manga right to left? Do not do this. I don't know for sure if you do, but I'm going to go ahead and tell not to do it EVER. There is a deep pyschological explanation for this, but I don't have enough room in this post to explain it.
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